Resolved comments from Cowlibob (talk) 08:00, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
Comment Overall, a good list. Here are some suggestions for improvements.
Switching around the mentions of nominations and awards so it reads for example: "Louie has won 12 awards from 42 nominations" instead of Louie has been nominated for 42 awards and has won 12". Repeat this for each separate award. It sounds better to have the smaller number first.
Fill in the blank spaces for the tables where the show itself is nominated with "Louie" makes the tables look better
I didn't make this change because I'm not sure it would clarify anything. The "Nominee(s)" column lays out the individuals nominated for the awards. If no individuals were clearly nominated, I think it should be left blank (like in other "awards and nominations" lists). Technically "Louie" is the nominee for all the awards. -- Wikipedical (talk) 04:53, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
You could contract "nominated for one award" --> nominated once
I think "nominated for one award" is clearer to the reader. Can you nominate someone once for multiple awards? I didn't make this change. -- Wikipedical (talk) 04:53, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
Is TVLine a reliable source? If there is doubt, you can use this Deadline source [] for the Critic's Choice awards and these ones for the TCA awards: noms[] win [].
TVLine is certainly a reliable source, so no need to make this change. Funny you mention Deadline specifically as both TVLine and Deadline are owned by the same company. -- Wikipedical (talk) 04:53, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
Is Zap2it a reliable source? If there is doubt, you can use this WGA source [].
Zap2it is certainly a reliable source, so no need to make this change. Zap2it is a Tribune Company subsidiary and is used in countless television related articles. -- Wikipedical (talk) 04:53, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
Hollywood Reporter should be referenced as work= so that it is italicized. The publisher is Prometheus Global Media. Huffington Post also work=. Cowlibob (talk) 17:44, 7 July 2014 (UTC)
Thanks for the review. Please let me know if you have any other comments or concerns. -- Wikipedical (talk) 04:53, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
Support Agree with the reasoning for you declining some of the suggestions. Just make sure to update the TCAs later on this month. I'm not as well versed about TV show articles but it seems to be comprehensive enough. Overall, a great list. Cowlibob (talk) 08:00, 8 July 2014 (UTC)