"Described by John ... his captaincy of his brother" --> "Described by John Pollack as "one of the world's most elegant and gifted strokemakers", he played most of his career under histhe captaincy of his elder twin-brother Steve Waugh."
For those of us who don't know all the major cricket events by heart, a link to Frank Worrel Trophy would be helpful. I notice that that article doesn't have the hyphen in the middle; that might be worth checking.
I don't think the comma after "Waugh's highest score of 153 not out" is needed.
Note 3: In British English, is it okay to have "over all" be two words?Giants2008 (Talk) 21:20, 23 May 2013 (UTC)
I don't see that in most lists. Is that a requirement? —Vensatry(Ping me) 09:31, 27 May 2013 (UTC)
No, it's not a requirement. I had a quick random sample of four FLs, 1 did have balls, 3 didn't. It's not so important as you've got strike rate in any case. The Rambling Man (talk) 09:56, 27 May 2013 (UTC)
Not a big deal and you can even ignore this : "Following his performances, Wisden Cricketers' Almanack named him as one of their five Cricketers of the Year the same year" - From http://www.espncricinfo.com/wisdenalmanack/content/story/154431.html , the WCY was given for his batting in the 1990 English season and the article was written before he made his Test debut. Tintin 12:18, 31 May 2013 (UTC)