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Enamorada de Ti (album)[edit]

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because…I would like to take it to FAC soon.

Thanks, Jonatalk to me 22:22, 28 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Tito Dutta (contact)
  • It was released posthumously on... (second sentence, lead)

— For the readers who don't know about Selena's death, it'll take some time to understand. And the readers who know about it don't need to be told that it released posthumously since Selena died in 1995 and the album released in 2012.

    • Other articles mentions the same thing (Michael (album)), and if readers who do not know her can always click on her article and read more about it. Lastly, there is a link in the article to her murder. jonatalk to me 20:49, 6 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • After performing to an enthusiastic crowd in Bolivia, A.B. decided to continue recording music

— When? Information available?

    • It says "three years ago" (from 2012) so I added "In 2009,". jonatalk to me 20:49, 6 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Enamorada de Ti (English: In Love with You) is the second remix album by American singer Selena.

— I think of American singer Selena sounds better! "By Selena" sounds she did all the works for the album!

    • Well she did record all of them that's why its her album. Not to so say that she did produce, arranged, mixed and did some programming. However, every album article on Wikipedia follows this style. jonatalk to me 20:49, 6 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Most probably there is an MoS rule which states article content should not be collapsed!
  • In Enamorada_de_Ti_(album)#Track_listing if there will not be no "Notes", that column may be removed!
  • Credits are taken from the album's liner notes

— You have linked "overview"page, the credit page can be linked directly too!

  • I can not see any citation in Chart positions and Certifications sections! 16:33, 6 May 2013 (UTC)