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I've listed this article for peer review because after the GA review, and a bit of feedback from J and the Dr (J Milburn and Template:Dr. Blofeld), both seemed positive. J advised taking it to peer review to see what needed doing before hopefully the next step is taken.

Thanks, Matty.007 09:10, 25 July 2014 (UTC)

  • I think the article is absolutely stellar, and couldn't find any real errors. I thought in the lead, it could read "The episode received a positive reception from critics, and Mikkelsen's performance as Magnussen, in particular, was praised." Also, the line spacing after the Moftiss interview in "Critical Recpetion" section is a little wonky, almost like there are two spaces there. Beyond that, it's a very strong article.--Esprit15d • talkcontribs 14:58, 8 August 2014 (UTC)
    • Not nominating for FA now as going off wiki for a few months, but if I return, who knows? I think you meant Gatiss rather than the Moftiss (imagine them blended!), and changed both issues per the suggestions. Thanks for the help, Matty.007 19:22, 8 August 2014 (UTC)
      • Nope, I meant Moftiss (which is the online name to refer to them as a team, but I guess that is less known that I realized). Glad to have helped. Best wishes.--Esprit15d • talkcontribs 23:29, 9 August 2014 (UTC)