Wikipedia:Peer review/Ian McDiarmid/archive2

Ian McDiarmid

I was wondering if anyone had any suggestions. Would this qualify as a good article? Please let me know what can be done to improve it. b_cubed 17:50, 18 October 2006 (UTC)

• First off, what the heck is up with the list of stage productions—why is there so much spacing? I'm going to remove that. Now, suggestions:
  • this article needs to be referenced heavily, with actor articles, this really isn't all that hard: Go find the IMBD or whatever listing of every movie he's been in then google every play annnnnd add a reference next to where its listed.
  • His life needs to be expanded a lot (biographical stuff)
  • Criticisms
  • Praise
  • Why is there an entire section dedicated to Star Wars films..?

Good luck. drumguy8800 C T 04:17, 19 October 2006 (UTC)

• Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Ruhrfisch 02:09, 22 October 2006 (UTC)