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Prison Break[edit]

Previous peer review

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I've listed this article for peer review because it has been reviewed the last time more than a year ago and it has come a long way. I need someone to tell me what's not very good about the article because I'm thinking of posting it to be an FA candidate.

Thanks, Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 07:07, 1 November 2008 (UTC)

  • The only thing I could possibly suggest for this page or a possible new Page, is a more in-depth guide to the episodes. it also could have a little bit more Information on the Spin-Off Section. Apart from that it is a very up to date, well detailed, well written Piece

by Cricket_boy27 (talk)

David Fuchs

I'm basing many of my comments on comparison with Lost (TV series), a FA TV series article.

  • You have the synopsis before production; on one hand, I kind of like starting chronologically with the history of the show's conception like in Lost, but if such a method sacrifices clarity it's best to keep it the way it is.

Yes check.svg Done

  • Convert the season synopses lead-ins to grammatical prose, please, e.g. "Season 1 begins..." instead of "Season 1: wasd..." et al

Yes check.svg Done

  • You should think about cutting down the character list to the essentials
  • The ratings and release tables could be turning into right-floating tables to reduce the breakup of text.
  • Merge, expand, or remove one-line sentences. Some of these just include rather unnecessary and unsourced trivia, e.g. "The last five episodes are the only ones shown on Hulu."
  • 'Other Media' could be turned into 'Adaptations' and include the rather stubby spinoff section.

--Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs (talk) 18:53, 12 November 2008 (UTC)