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After a major rewrite (removing a large amount of copied text) this article is unclassified; I'd like it reviewed with a view to pushing it to WP:GA in the future. Cheers, matt (talk) 08:51, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Nice! A couple of points:

The "Local election" section is confusing to the reader - it looks like Southcote is a 3-seat ward, with one of those seats up for election each year. The table however makes it look like a 1-seat ward which is constantly changing hands. Simply listing the current councilors, and if you can find the results mentioning whether it's always been Labour-held would probably be enough.
There's nothing post-1960s in the history section, which makes it look a bit empty. For completeness, it would be nice to have something there - perhaps something about the regeneration of Coronation Square and the Elvian School site.
A map of the ward within Reading would be useful, perhaps with either of these map blanks: File:Reading UK location map.svg or File:Reading UK ward map 2010 (blank).svg. I can help with this, if you'd like.

Smurrayinchester 12:06, 17 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your input! I'm incredibly busy with work at the moment but when it quietens down I'll have a look! Cheers, matt (talk) 16:59, 22 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Mattgirling: - the way the article is, were there no local elections before 2010? More text needed in that section. Anything on the topics of healthcare, crime and media? starship.paint ~ ¡Olé! 12:17, 7 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]