Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 October 7

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The field of Artificial Intelligence (AI) and the Data Mining has been grown rapidly in this decade. These terms of the sciences are specialized in the analysis and research of the available data from different perspective to extract or generally predict some useful data. Most companies or industries use these new data to increase their revenues through focusing on certain customers or products or other business fields.

Netra Nahar 13:30, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but it seems more of a draft of s student essay, not written in the way wikipedia articles should be. I would suggest moving to under your user space until you get more familiar with what will survive in wikipedia. For example, avoid dated statements and never use wikipedia itself for sources. W Nowicki (talk) 21:33, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Finished Wiki page for Eddie Reeves, popular song writer and well known member of the record business community. Eddie Reeves has numerous un-linked references and mentions in other Wikipedia pages. Seeking independent review. Thank You in advance.

174.109.16.142 (talk) 15:59, 7 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hi the article was deleted a couple of weeks ago, I have since unearthed further sources which in my view establish the clear notability of the event. Best wishes, Jprw (talk) 16:11, 7 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Jprw (talk) 16:11, 7 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'm looking for other people who frequented the bar and can add more of the performers names. Also, additional stories about the experiences at the bar.

And of course, help in general editing.


Nikdemet (talk) 18:36, 7 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

216.40.146.123 (talk) 23:16, 7 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The article has been rejected for "unsourced suggestions or sources that are not reliable per the verifiability policy". After having read the "Wikipedia:Identifying reliable sources" page it is still not clear to me which of the cited sources are not reliable and why. Could you please explain it in detail ? I'm posting here since I didn't find a way to contact the first reviewer. This is my first article so any help would be greatly appreciated. Many thanks in advance !

Brubix (talk) 23:53, 7 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]