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[edit] Guild of Copy Editors' requests page

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The goal of the Guild of Copy Editors is to improve articles in the English Wikipedia by improving articles tagged for copy editing using {{copyedit}}, and by maintaining the category of articles needing copy edit. This page is where you can list requests specifically for copy editing.

[edit] Instructions for making a request

If the article is to be a Good Article nomination or a Featured Article candidate, please try to have the copy editing done before the process starts, not after the nomination. Please note that having your article copy edited by our team does not guarantee that the prose will be considered acceptable to your GA or FA reviewers. Please do not list more than three articles at a time.

To make a request, use the following format:

===[[Articlename]]===
Comments ~~~~

Please put new requests at the bottom.

[edit] Instructions for copy editors

  • Please ensure you are familiar with the Wikipedia Manual of Style and are familiar with the expectations for editing for the GOCE, as outlined in our Step by Step guide. Articles that are potential Featured Article candidates should only be handled by experienced editors.
  • Please do not put yourself down for more than one article at any one time. Multiple bookings are not encouraged. If you have signed on but cannot fulfill a request for any reason, please update the status here so that someone else can continue from where you stopped.
  • Please consider adding {{GOCE|user=UserName|date=date completed}} on the talk page of completed articles.
  • When you have completed a request, please either add a line with the template {{Done}} and sign it, or (alternatively) you can add the details of the request to the archive page and delete the request here. Please do not delete the request here without archiving it.



[edit] December 2011

[edit] Ra.One

Article is under peer review, needs a coy edit. -- Karthik Nadar (talk) 07:01, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

[edit] Acharya Institute of Technology

I hope, this article can get to GA, hence it needs to be copy-edited. Thanks, Sourav Mohanty (talk) 12:21, 2 December 2011 (UTC)

On hold. I've asked the requester to provide expansions of the many abbreviations used in the article. I'm willing to take it on once this is done. --Stfg (talk) 22:25, 12 February 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Bloody Knife

The article is currently being reviewed for GA and the reviewer suggested that I put in a request for a copy edit. Thanks. RG (talk) 05:40, 7 December 2011 (UTC)

Working --Sp33dyphil ©hatontributions 22:29, 7 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Burger King advertising

Hello again! I am looking to bring this article to GA status and need someone to look over this with a fresh pair of eyes! Thanks for the help on the other related articles, and for the work to be done on this one. --Jeremy (blah blahI did it!) 06:37, 12 December 2011 (UTC)

Working --Sp33dyphil ©hatontributions 12:51, 21 December 2011 (UTC)

On hold The article is somewhat unreferenced; I'd like Jerem43 to add references first before I resume my copy-edit. --Sp33dyphil ©hatontributions 22:34, 26 December 2011 (UTC)

[edit] Entre a Mi Mundo

Needs help to get to GA status. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 20:26, 13 December 2011 (UTC)

[edit] Chiranjeevi

Article needs a thorough copyedit before nominating it for GA. Commander (Ping me) 13:58, 14 December 2011 (UTC)

[edit] Dragon Warrior

I need someone who can continue where User:Drilnoth left off at Talk:Dragon Warrior#Various comments during copyedit. This isn't a simple copyedit. It is a thorough line-by-line copyedit review of the article to help improve clarrification to someone who has never heard of the game, accuracy and style for eventual FAC. I specifically want someone to make certain to clear up any issues of clarification or style with regard to terminology, jargon, and semantics.Jinnai 16:56, 14 December 2011 (UTC)

[edit] Missing My Baby

I would like to take the article to FAC one day. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 20:46, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

[edit] The Constant

Current FAC, needs some prose cleanup. igordebraga 01:53, 20 December 2011 (UTC)

[edit] Scarlet Heart

Hi, I've been doing some clean up with the article of the recent CHinese TV serial Startling by Each Step. However, I am not confident of my ability and can someone please help on proofreading and grammar check. PLEASE?! Thank you.--NeoBatfreak (talk) 05:24, 25 December 2011 (UTC)

The article was moved to Scarlet Heart around 3 February and the redirect has been deleted. --Stfg (talk) 11:19, 12 February 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Government of Croatia

I'd like to get this article to GA, but I think that a thorough copyedit might be useful before a nomination. Thanks! Tomobe03 (talk) 11:40, 26 December 2011 (UTC)

Doing... - Will start work either today or tomorrow. Allens (talk) 14:41, 12 February 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Beat of My Drum

It isn't a huge article but I think my prose isn't brilliant so if anybody could c/e it I would be very grateful. Thanks in advance --FeuDeJoie (talk) 22:48, 27 December 2011 (UTC) -Have done some copyediting, just needs to be checked HonkyTonkHarlot (talk) 05:54, 1 February 2012 (UTC)

[edit] What a Girl Wants (song)

I would like to get this article to GA, but my prose isn't brilliant and just needs a bit of copyediting -FeuDeJoie (talk) 00:00, 30 December 2011 (UTC)

[edit] Fandi Ahmad

Dear fellow Wikipedians, I humbly present for copyediting, this potential GA about a legendary Singaporean footballer! Start 2012 by copyediting this article and thus supporting the quest to counter systemic bias on Wikipedia! I hope you enjoy copyediting this short, but interesting article, as much as I enjoyed writing it! Thanks! 谢谢!Terima kasih! நன்றி! J.L.W.S. The Special One (talk) 14:49, 31 December 2011 (UTC)

[edit] January 2012

[edit] A Weaver on the Horizon

Hi, I hope to have an uninvolved editor doing a copy edit of an article of the Chinese TV serial A Weaver on the Horizon, for grammar and structure. I would appreciate it if someone did. Thank you.--NeoBatfreak (talk) 05:27, 3 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Video Games (song)

Hi, I have nominated this article about the Lana Del Rey song a few weeks ago, and the reviewer just started the review for it. However, he believes that the article has too many quotations and poor prose/wording. I'm requestin a good copy edit because this is the debut single by Lana Del Rey, it is important to have a good article about it because it's constantly accessed by the public/fans. Saulo Talk to Me 17:01, 3 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Costoboci

This not very long history article would need some copy editing before being nominated for GA. Thanks a lot!--Codrin.B (talk) 19:26, 5 January 2012 (UTC)

Working Chaosdruid (talk) 11:03, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
On hold Short hold for some clarity and background - no longer than 24 hours, notes on talk page. Chaosdruid (talk) 17:22, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
Added some answers to your questions. Thanks for the helping with the CE.--Codrin.B (talk) 18:38, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
Still waiting for the third party (expert on the region) to provide info, if none by 5 February I will go ahead. Chaosdruid (talk) 13:42, 3 February 2012 (UTC)

[edit] List of Monk characters

This article is fairly long (around 83,000 bytes) and contains, in my opinion, way too much detail. Thank you! Kevinbrogers (talk) 07:57, 6 January 2012 (UTC)

Got it. Lfstevens (talk) 17:57, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
Abandoning ship, because part way through, SouthernLegacy started a slash and burn assualt. Cheers. Lfstevens (talk) 22:25, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Albion class landing platform dock

This one has been reworked and just passed B class at WP:MILHIST, I would next like to nominate it for a GA review, so would appreciate a copy edit by an uninvolved editor. Thanks in advance. Jim Sweeney (talk) 10:59, 7 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Newspaper Boy (film)

Article needs a thorough copyedit before being nominated for GA.DdraconiandevilL (talk) 05:41, 8 January 2012 (UTC)

Note: user has been blocked as a sockpuppet of Arfaz, who was blocked for copyright infringement. Currently investigating page. Allens (talk) 18:41, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

[edit] My Only Wish (This Year)

The article is already a GA, but I want to improve its prose quality since a lot new information was added. - Saulo Talk to Me 22:31, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Mani Ratnam

The article needs a thorough copy edit before taking it to GAN. Commander (Ping me) 13:36, 13 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Sino-Xiongnu War

Hello fellow contributors, could someone copy edit this? Something about nomadic and eastern military history. Thank you. --Cold Season (talk) 17:45, 19 January 2012 (UTC)

It just passed a third-party nomination for DYK. --Cold Season (talk) 01:23, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] History of Iraq (1968–2003)

Yupp – the article is about ba'athist ruled Iraq (literally the Iraq ruled by Ahmed Hassan al-Bakr and Saddam Hussein). --TIAYN (talk) 16:18, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

I'm planning to nominate this article to GA status. --TIAYN (talk) 13:42, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Khilji dynasty

Hi, can someone please take a look at this article and copy-edit it. Thank you (149.151.144.57 (talk) 23:13, 20 January 2012 (UTC))

[edit] Ochre Coloured Pottery culture

Hi, can someone please take a look at this article and copy-edit it. Thank you (149.151.144.57 (talk) 23:13, 20 January 2012 (UTC))

[edit] Khusro Khan

Hi, can someone please take a look at this article and copy-edit it. Thank you (149.151.144.57 (talk) 23:13, 20 January 2012 (UTC))

[edit] Liverpool F.C. 4–3 Newcastle United F.C. (1996)

Hello, I would appreciate if anyone can find the time to take a look at this and copy-edit. Much of its work has been done the last two days and I would like to nominate this for WP:GAC in the future. Thank you, – Lemonade51 (talk) 22:56, 21 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Tay–Sachs disease

As requested on the subpage, but the subpage is inactive by copyeditors. ~~Ebe123~~ → report on my contribs. 11:20, 23 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Rae Wilson

I would like this article to be copy edited because I one day plan to nominate it at FAC. I am going to be putting in a few requests in different places from now on. This is the second, as I have requested a peer review. Obviously the more poeple that help out and offer a hand - the better chance it will have when it is eventually nominated. I want to do everything possible to improve it to so much before I nominate it. So if you can spare the time then please do.Rain the 1 04:12, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] 1985 European Cup Final

Recently failed GAN, with prose the main issue, so copyedit would be helpful to eliminate these issues. NapHit (talk) 23:18, 25 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Television in Croatia

I'd like to nominate this article at GAN, and I'd appreciate if someone could give it a thorough copyedit beforehand. Tomobe03 (talk) 10:50, 27 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Mirrors 2

Hi, I need someone to copyedit the movie Mirrors 2 article. Thank you very much.--NeoBatfreak (talk) 02:40, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Hafizullah Amin

Second communist leader of Afghanistan. --TIAYN (talk) 10:51, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

I'm planning to nominate this article to GA status. --TIAYN (talk) 13:42, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Olek

Fabric, installation artist, Polish-born, US-based, currently working in the UK, best known for wrapping things and people in crocheting. It's a GA, I'd like to get this article closer to the quality of FA. -- Zanimum (talk) 18:39, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Kublai Khan

This is a massive article, which happens to be in pretty poor shape. My initial objective was to get this to GA level, but before I can even begin to think about that, it needs to be copyedited. Whoever takes this on should be willing and able to shave large amounts of prose out, as it seems like portions of the article deal more with the Yuan Dynasty than they do Kublai. I tried to do this myself, but got quite overwhelmed and decided that if it were to be done right, I need to take it to the experts. Sven Manguard Wha? 05:51, 29 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Era of Stagnation

An article I've been working on. --TIAYN (talk) 09:03, 29 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Dacian language

A rather large article which badly needs a copy edit. Hoping to get it to GA status. Thanks. Codrin.B (talk) 15:13, 30 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Free Dacians

A rather short article which was recently expanded and cleaned up. It would need copy editing before nomination for GA. Thanks. Codrin.B (talk) 15:20, 30 January 2012 (UTC)

[edit] February 2012

[edit] Bastion (video game)

A new GA that I've given a once-over to; planning to take it to FAC as soon as it gets a copyedit. --PresN 01:27, 1 February 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Voluntary Human Extinction Movement

Bit of an odd article here, a lot of discussion has gone into it, but an outside look at the prose would be helpful as it's going for GA status. Mark Arsten (talk) 23:27, 2 February 2012 (UTC)

[edit] History of St. Louis, Missouri

Already listed as GA and underwent peer review last autumn in preparation for FAC, but a note was made that the prose might need tweaking in places. A fresh set of eyes would be really appreciated. Thanks in advance. poroubalous (talk) 01:02, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Chrisye

Indonesian singer, I hope to bring the article to FAC by mid February. Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:41, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

I have transferred this here from the FAC requests page, as this article is only at GAN. --Stfg (talk) 13:39, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Movement for the Intellectually Disabled of Singapore

Fellow Wikipedians, I humbly present for copyediting, this article about a Singaporean charitable organisation catering to the intellectually disabled! The organisation turns 50 this year and I am aiming to get their article to GA status. Please support the quest to counter systemic bias on Wikipedia by copyediting this short, but interesting article. I hope you enjoy copyediting it as much as I enjoyed writing it! Thanks! 谢谢!Terima kasih! நன்றி! J.L.W.S. The Special One (talk) 17:03, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Gloucester County College

Hi. I asked for this article to be peer reviewed, and one of the comments was that some sections lacked clarity. Given that I'd written much of the article - it was originally a stub - I can't see either a lack of clarity or how to improve the writing, so I need an outside pair of eyes (or two, or three, or...) to do it. Any improvements in tone would also be appreciated; at the time, it was said to be too positive, but I think the introduction of much more details in various places has helped with that - however, I'm biased. I'm also wondering if it needs to be split into sub-articles, and if so, how. The University Style Guide should generally be followed. Thanks very much! Allens (talk) 16:59, 6 February 2012 (UTC)

Oh. I should mention that I'd like to take it to GA once it's copyedited. Allens (talk) 13:32, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

[edit] Augustinian theodicy

I have been improving this article for a little while now. I'm quite happy with it but, as is always the case, would like outside opinions. I've had a peer review, but a copyedit from someone who isn't myself is always beneficial. I hope to take the article to FAC at some point in the future. ItsZippy (talkcontributions) 18:05, 12 February 2012 (UTC)

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