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This is not at all a good article. It is so unbalanced, the trivia section isn't even trivia, it'sbragging and selling points. This is garbage. [[User:Gopherbassist|Gopherbassist]] 03:19, 15 August 2006 (UTC) |
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:That's your opinion, friend. I take it you think I some how work for Bic or earn my living from their products. I do not. The article may well be garbage.I am certainly no "writer" but I do like industrial design and I think my article is better than no article, which was the case before my article. If you bothered to check the other articles I have written/contributed to you'd see they were all on similar design based subjects (and no doubt you would consider equally poorly written) [[Moka Express]], [[Luxo L1]], [[Anglepoise lamp]], [[Design classic]], [[Telstar (ball)]], [[Cifra 3]] etc. |
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:These pens are so bloody common, the idea that a stub article in Wikipedia is going to sell them isn't really plausible. People go into corner shops and buy them as and when they need them- They don't reaserch the pens first on Wikipedia. |
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:I dont see any thing "wrong with the trivia section".It is trivia. |
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:The use of hairspray as an ink remover wouldn't be a good selling point as it could infer the pens leaked! --[[User:Trounce|Trounce]] 10:51, 26 August 2006 (UTC) |
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::I've had a look at an article that you wrote, [[Traben Bass Company]] and I have to say you sure do have some cheek to criticise my article, on any grounds! The [[Traben Bass Company]] article reads like a product catalogue for the company. If you spent more time improving your own articles and less time criticising other peoples, Wikipedia would be much better off!--[[User:Trounce|Trounce]] 11:20, 26 August 2006 (UTC) |
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:::I've got proble admitting my article might need work, but it's not an advirtisment. If you think my article needs to be changed, discuss it. Don't just bash me because you're to stupid to see what's wrong with this article. And most of the trivia is a bunch of selling points. [[User:Gopherbassist|Gopherbassist]] 19:18, 28 August 2006 (UTC) |
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:You're wrong, the only problem I have with those other articles is the way you have the pictures set up. |
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::: I find it hypocritical of you to knock the trivia section of my article as "sellling points" when I could call your entire article one big selling point. Look, I wouldn't have bothered to write that stuff I wrote on the talk page of [[Traben Bass Company]] save for the fact I think your initial remaks at the start of this talk page are bang out of line. The reason I did it was to try to highlight to you that (1) It's kind of offensive to trash someone's article like you did and (2)That one man's meat is another man's poision. You view the [[Traben Bass Company]] article as a fine, if unpolished contribution to Wikipedia. Someone eles could just as easily view it as a product catalogue for the company. The article really dosen't bother me in any way me. Your "this is garbage" coment on this article did bother me. |
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::: On the Trivia points: |
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::: >It was designed by the Décolletage Plastique Design Team. |
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::: >It is made from polystyrene, polypropylene, tungsten carbide and brass/nickel silver. |
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::: These are both from the MoMA Humble Masterpieces ehibition list- hardly a catalogue for bic pens. They also provide good wikilinks to the materials. |
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::: >The pen's lid has a small hole in it to prevent choking if accidentally swallowed. |
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::: >The point size is one millimetre and it will write for a distance of between two to three kilometres |
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::: >It comes in four colors: blue, black, red and green -except in the U.S., where green is unavailable. |
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::: This is trivia. According to the dictionary here in front of me trivia is defined as "petty details or considerations". The idea that some how people will be influenced to buy a Bic pen by these three "selling points" just isn't credible. |
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:::::: "I think I'll buy this pen honey, 'cause Wikipedia says I won't choke if I swallow the lid!!!" |
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:::::: "Gee honey, that's amazing, Wikipedia says they make these things in black and red too!" |
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::: >Bic suggests the use of hair spray as a good ballpoint ink remover |
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::: This is an "anti-selling" point as I said previously |
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::: The only thing that MIGHT be construed as some kind of bow to commercialism is the EAN (barcode). I put this in as I have a bit of a barcode fetish, it was to hand at the time of writing, and it gave an excuse to wikilink to the EAN article. On closer examination this could't really be called a selling point or a bow to commercialism. The idea that someone would take down the EAN and bring it to a shop to request a Bic pen is far fetched. As I said elsewhere people buy pens as and when they need them, choosing the product on offer at the time. They dont order them by EAN. |
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::: and I didnt post the trivia about lock picking.--[[User:Trounce|Trounce]] 09:20, 29 August 2006 (UTC) |
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