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:{{Re|JoJo_Anthrax}} Thanks for your comment. Could you please show me an example of how to make it better in the article? [[User:Luca boscolo|Luca boscolo]] ([[User talk:Luca boscolo|talk]]) 09:00, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
:{{Re|JoJo_Anthrax}} Thanks for your comment. Could you please show me an example of how to make it better in the article? [[User:Luca boscolo|Luca boscolo]] ([[User talk:Luca boscolo|talk]]) 09:00, 6 November 2022 (UTC)

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I have received money to write this article. [[User:Luca boscolo|Luca boscolo]] ([[User talk:Luca boscolo|talk]]) 09:36, 6 November 2022 (UTC)

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Lots of problems here

I have begun to edit some of the problematic content on this page, but there is a LOT more to do. Much of the grammar is poor, and much of the content is WP:PUFFERY and WP:PROMO. If discussion is needed, let's have it here. JoJo Anthrax (talk) 15:30, 1 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@JoJo Anthrax: Thanks for your comment. Could you please show me an example of how to make it better in the article? Luca boscolo (talk) 09:00, 6 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

COI

I have received money to write this article. Luca boscolo (talk) 09:36, 6 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]