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:*'''Support'''. the proposed titles are not ambiguous. I do think that perhaps [[Charles X]] ought to be at [[Charles X of France]] but that is outside the scope of this RM. [[User:Bensci54|Bensci54]] ([[User talk:Bensci54|talk]]) 17:06, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
:*'''Support'''. the proposed titles are not ambiguous. I do think that perhaps [[Charles X]] ought to be at [[Charles X of France]] but that is outside the scope of this RM. [[User:Bensci54|Bensci54]] ([[User talk:Bensci54|talk]]) 17:06, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
*'''Support''' no other ambiguous titles and satisfies both [[WP:CONCISE]] and [[WP:COMMONNAME]]. No legitimate opposition really.  — [[User:Amakuru|Amakuru]] ([[User talk:Amakuru|talk]]) 19:58, 21 January 2024 (UTC)

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Good articleCharles XI of Sweden has been listed as one of the History good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
September 27, 2008Good article nomineeListed
On this day...Facts from this article were featured on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "On this day..." column on February 13, 2013, February 13, 2019, and February 13, 2021.

older comments

Removed: "His cruelty earned him the name of Charles the Peoplemurderer in Scania." What is the source of this statement, which I never have heard of? Den fjättrade ankan 23:10, 26 May 2004 (UTC)[reply]

Removed: "Charles XI was however very harsh to the local population of occupied Scania, only 20 years earlier a Danish heartland, and in his diary it can be read that he had plans on deporting the population to Balticum." What is the source of this statement? Den fjättrade ankan 23:20, 26 May 2004 (UTC)[reply]

I put those sentences there, and my source was susning.nu. I can understand that you want a more reliable source; I'll try to see if I can find one. That statement needs a better and larger context anyway. ✏ Sverdrup 10:55, 27 May 2004 (UTC)[reply]
an addition:
I do however defend the inclusion of this information, since we have a policy of NPOV. Still today swedish history classes and textbooks are very POV, and not a good single source for a NPOV Wikipedia article. ✏ Sverdrup 11:03, 27 May 2004 (UTC)[reply]
NPOV does not mean presenting myths or factoids as facts. I don't agree that "swedish history classes and textbooks are very POV", at least not in a Swedish nationalist way, on the contrary, they are mostly NPOV, especially regarding nationalism. Most current Swedish historians are Marxists, anti-nationalistic, and anti-royalistics, and does not try to conceal cruelties of Swedish kings, on the contrary they try to exaggerate them. This talk about "Charles the Peoplemurderer" is never heard of. To me it sounds very much like the myth about Christian the Good. Den fjättrade ankan 18:50, 27 May 2004 (UTC) (Som finner det mycket märkligt att diskutera svenska förhållanden med en annan svensk på engelska. Jag tror knappast att någon annan än svenskar bryr sig om denna artikel. Men det är ju på engelska Wikipedia, så då måste man ju skriva på engelska.)[reply]
Danes and Skåninge might. Eradicating all mentions of the genocides Karl XI performed in Skåne (ordering every man between 16 and 60 killed, for example) is history revision that still seems to be taught in Swedish schools. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 192.38.109.246 (talk) 18:43, 18 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The statement has been reinserted, only high swedes from Stockholm or other northern parts try to deny the true history of Charles XI, the man hailed wrongfully as a hero up north is most certainly not down south, last evidence of this statement is the Scanian objections to the Swedish 500kr bill which had Charles XI's picture portrayed, calling him ' Charles Peoplemurderer'

Gentlemen, I do not believe "peoplemurderer" is a proper English word. I have failed to find it in any dictionary I own. The English word for "folkmord" is "genocide". Presumably, you can indicate the person making it by calling him "genocider". Concerning Charles XI's treatment of rebels supporting the Danish king in Nothern Skåne, he acted with very harsh, even terroristic counter-guerilla methods (such as holding entire villages responsible for acts of rebels in the vicinity and executing captured rebels in cruel ways). However, as far as I can make out this was entirely within the conventions of warfare at that time. As far as Charles XI was concerned, nominally Swedish people working for the Danish king were rebels and traitors and did not even enjoy the limited right granted to prisoners of war at that time. Most monarchs of this era facing a peasant rebellion would have used methods fairly similar to the ones used by Charles XI during the Danish war. -Sensemaker

A remarc: I think very few monarchs of this period can avoid being kalled massmurderers, if we use the modern definition. --85.226.44.74 (talk) 11:38, 24 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Charles XI and domestication of moose

Long ago in various UseNet threads a few people came forward with the information that this king had sponsored an effort to domesticate moose for military use, presumably as attack cavalry - with sharpened horns, good for pack burdens, and potentially aggressive in the field; also twice the size of a war horse). Apparently they turned out to be useful for messengers only, and the project fell through because there weren't enough of them, and they're hard to breed in captivity...and according to the trivia section of the Moose article there were worries that they'd allow thieves and other criminals to outrun law enforcement types using only horses. Does anyone here know where a cite or further details for this would be found?Skookum1 02:01, 18 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

I am going to review this article. Kensplanet (talk) 17:34, 26 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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Comments

LEAD

  • Charles XI (Swedish: Karl XI, 24 November 1655old style – 5 April 1697old style
It's a bit difficult for a user like me to understand what old style means. Instead of old style, wh don't you directly put Julian Calender. Anyway, not a major problem since that is indicated by the footnote.
  • Charles XI was succeeded by the only son that reached adulthood, Charles XII, who made use of the well-trained army in battles throughout Europe.
Please copyedit this sentence.

I think the article satisfies good article criteria. The article will have to be more comprehensive for FA status. Good work for GA. I'll gladly promote this article. Thanks, Kensplanet (talk) 06:53, 27 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Yes, it is not a proper method to maintain the old style of date as its current date. While as a writer of history, one would want to include a referral to it, it should not be maintained as the actual date for the occurrence. So, I am noting here that it should be retained in the article but not in the format that it currently is. I am going to change this to reflect a more responsible presentation. Stevenmitchell (talk) 11:31, 30 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
It is certainly standard to use the Julian calendar for times when it was in use. Cervantes and Shakespeare both died on April 23 1616, but over a week apart. As both England and Sweden were still using the Julian calendar during his lifetime, it is the appropriate calendar to use here. Compare e.g. his contemporary William III of England.
Andejons (talk) 14:50, 30 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

His Mother

There should be a least something in the article about the fact that he was deply devoted to his mother his entire life: this was the reason to why his wife was put below his mother at court. It need only be one sentence. And here is one anecdote: During his first appearances in parliament, he talked only to the members of the government through her; he would whisper the questions he had to the parliament to her, and she would ask them loud and clear. reference: * Herman Lindqvist, Historien om Sverige: Storhet och Fall (History of Sweden; Greatness and fall) (in Swedish) This is a charming anecdote, which gives a personal and authentic feeling to it!--85.226.44.74 (talk) 15:24, 31 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Of course, this is an important thing to mention, as it describes their relationship and her influence and position. I have reintroduced it. h--85.226.42.57 (talk) 10:56, 10 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

No mention of the Skåne genocides?

I find it odd that a lengthy article about Karl XI has no mention whatsoever about the ethnic cleansing that was executed by Karl during the Scanian Wars? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 192.38.109.246 (talk) 18:46, 18 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Harly ethnic; the Swedish and Danes were of the same ethnicity. That was hardly unusual during that age, but should of course be mentioned in the article of the Scanian war. --85.226.44.74 (talk) 11:35, 24 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Numeral, fluff etc

I had tightened up a paragraph about this king's numeral (XI) and removed such peacock/exaggerated words as "highly" and an irrelevant king's name and an unprecise term "in the line", and Swenglish such as "took their numbers" etc. This was reversed today with this summary: (Rv. Some of the early Swedish kings that carried names later kings also do are semi-mythological at best, that is). I have no idea what that means. Am reverting back to what I did on the 9th and ask that any further revisions of these details be explained clearly here. SergeWoodzing (talk) 14:46, 20 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I consider Serge's version to be slightly better. However, I consider these long details on monarchs "real" number to often be superfluous, more so when it is put in the lead section.
Personally I wouldn't care if the king was, quote, "actually the 5th King Charles", or not. I think it would be worthy of a footnote and maybe a simple sentence in the lead...
Fred-J 20:08, 21 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Appreciate your comment - thank you! - and your opinions. That's why I tried to shorten that a bit anyway. My experience is that many people wonder why some numberings do not jive, so to speak, and that some explanation is necessary. Especially when they ask who all those 16 were, based on the current king's unusually high numeral. Regards, SergeWoodzing (talk) 23:18, 21 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

There's no mention of Sweden entering the Triple Alliance during Charles' reign. It happened during the regency of Hedvig Eleonora but Hedvig's article doesn't mention it either.

Top.Squark (talk) 18:12, 6 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Assimilation of the newest dominions

On the map it states Finland 1581. The treaty of Nöteborg is from 1323 when the border zone was demarcated from the Karelian Isthmus to the Gulf of Bothnia. In treaty of Teusina 1595, Sweden incorporated the modern day North-Savo, Kainuu, Northern Ostrobotnia, and the rest of Lapland. The map seems to be at least from a Finnish point of view severly out of place. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 188.64.5.173 (talk) 07:23, 25 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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State of the corpse and lack of sainthood

The incorruptibility of corpes of Christian saints originated some centuries before the Middle Age. This free article testifies it was a living belief even in the 18th-century Protestant Sweden. Subject of king Charles XI asked themselves why their sovereign had been recognized in a physiological state opposite to the one pertaining Christian saints. 1719 was the year of the crisis of European absolutism.

If it seems not to be an useful end of the WP article, then the section can be eventually moved to the previous paragraph related to the king's death.

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Requested move 13 January 2024

– There are no Charles XIs and Charles XIIs as kings of countries other than Sweden. 176.33.241.125 (talk) 08:19, 13 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Agree. --SergeWoodzing (talk) 18:55, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Support per nom. Unambiguous numbering. Also support the proposal by @162 etc.. estar8806 (talk) 22:11, 13 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Indexes commonly use descriptive terms. For example, your number 7 uses Cyclades (island) whereas Wikipedia uses just Cyclades and even England, Britain instead of just England. Wikipedia is a digital encyclopedia and is thus able to do things differently, more efficiently. Its policy is to not define the subject in the article title. Surtsicna (talk) 14:56, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Nonsense. Almost all indexes above are perfectly concise. They are clear evidence of recognizability and WP:COMMONNAME in general English-language works. All indexes treat "of Sweden" as essential for recognition by readers. Walrasiad (talk) 16:29, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
You may call it nonsense but it's plain to see: one says England, Britain instead of England; one says Cyclades (island) instead of Cyclades; one says Childebert I (Frankish king) whereas we say just Childebert I; one says Demetrius of Pharos (ruler of Illyria) whereas Wikipedia says simply Demetrius of Pharos; one says Isaac II Angelus (Byzantine emperor) whereas we say simply Isaac II Angelos, etc. The description found in indexes is, as we can see, not essential to have in Wikipedia article titles; Wikipedia puts such descriptions in short descriptions rather than in article titles. Surtsicna (talk) 17:14, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
There are loads of Charles, with numbers largely unmemorable. As indexes show, "of Sweden" disambiguates and makes them more recognizable. This proposal is not an improvement, but detriment to readers. Walrasiad (talk) 17:35, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, there are loads of Charles, but the proposal is not to move to Charles. It is to move to Charles XI, which is unambiguous and therefore requires no disambiguation. Everyone who is familiar with Charles XI will recognize that the article named Charles XI is about Charles XI; therefore the proposed title satisfies WP:RECOGNIZABILITY. Surtsicna (talk) 17:43, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Not a household name to English-speaking readers to be on first name basis only. This is not Cher. Ordinals are not very memorable - whether he is XI or IX or Xi Jinping's cousin is hardly memorable. That's why of "of Sweden" improves recognizability. It effectively serves as a surname. That's why "of Sweden" is included in indexes - recognizability. It's their WP:COMMONNAME. Walrasiad (talk) 18:11, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"Household name" and "memorability" are not naming criteria. Félix Faure is not a household name to English-speaking readers either, yet we do not have him under Félix Faure of France. And while SergeWoodzing is far better versed in Swedish royal surnames, I can assure you that "of Sweden" is not, cannot, and should not be seen as a surname or anything of the sort. Surtsicna (talk) 18:24, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I agree 100%. --SergeWoodzing (talk) 18:55, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Felix Faure has a surname. Dropping "Faure" and reducing him to "Felix Francois" would reduce recognizability. Which is what you're proposing here. Walrasiad (talk) 18:32, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, exactly! Calling him "Felix Francois" instead of "Félix Faure" would be against WP:RECOGNIZABILITY because people familiar with Faure would not recognize it. Meanwhile people familiar with Charles XI will recognize that the article titled Charles XI is about Charles XI. Finally we are dealing with the term recognizability as defined at WP:RECOGNIZABILITY. Surtsicna (talk) 18:50, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
And "of Sweden" is his surname here. His middle name "Xi" is not so memorable or recognizable. His daughters are "Hedvig Sophia of Sweden" and "Ulrika Eleonora of Sweden". They get to keep their surnames, their father's house, "of Sweden". So should he. Walrasiad (talk) 18:53, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
No, "of Sweden" is not a surname. And "XI" is not a middle name. --SergeWoodzing (talk) 20:50, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Serves the same functional purpose as a surname. Just like your surname or mine - it identifies their father's house. Walrasiad (talk) 22:55, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
If anyone sees "of Sweden" as being anything like a surname, it is all the more reason to move these articles. Surtsicna (talk) 11:22, 15 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
As shown above in indexes for RSs, they all think it is necessary. It is part of their WP:COMMONNAME. Walrasiad (talk) 11:56, 15 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
No, indexes show no such thing. Firstly, they do not call them "of Sweden" but "(king of Sweden)"; secondly, indexes do the same for topics like England, which, in a case you showed up there, they call England, Britain. Wikipedia has short descriptions for those purposes. Surtsicna (talk) 12:20, 15 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Doesn't matter. "of Sweden" in some form or other is part of his WP:COMMONNAME not only in general works, as proved in the indexes above, but also the article titles in works of encyclopedic reference (the Wikipedia standard) e.g. Britannica, Columbia, etc. Walrasiad (talk) 02:16, 21 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The vast majority of sources refer to him as "Charles XI", as they do with all monarchs. Introductions often specify "of Sweden", but then drop it immediately and stick with either "Charles XI" or simply "Charles". Same thing in Swedish sources, I should add.
Note that both of the works you've linked very explicitly refer to "Charles XI", both in-line and in the title. The added "of Sweden" is added to clarify his royal title, just like with Elizabeth II and Napoleon. Peter Isotalo 12:19, 21 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Napoleon & Elizabeth II are household names to general English-speaking audiences - that is, Wikipedia readers - and consequently more easily WP:RECOGNIZABLE. "Charles XI" is not. Article titles have to stand alone and without context. Article titles are not running text - they are the moment of introduction of a name. Works that refer to Bill Clinton, start by introducing him as "Bill Clinton" before they move on to refer to him simply as "Bill" or "Clinton" thereafter alone. So "Bill Clinton", not simply Bill, is his WP:COMMONNAME. As provided by evidence given above, demonstrated aplenty in works above - English-language works of general reference, both in articles and indexes, which are concise, "Charles XI" never stands alone, but always includes "of Sweden" in the title. That's his WP:COMMONNAME. Walrasiad (talk) 14:26, 21 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This was discussed in September (See above), and the result was not moved. --Marbe166 (talk) 11:42, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
In the September discussion WP:NCROY was cited against the move. But in November there was "a strong consensus" to change WP:NCROY because it did not match WP:Article title policy. The move as proposed now matches both WP:NCROY and WP:AT policy. Surtsicna (talk) 15:03, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose It would seem strange for "Charles X" to be used solely for the French king, but "Charles XI" to be used solely for the Swedish king. UmbrellaTheLeef (talk) 14:47, 19 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Support If there are no other "Charles XI", the disambiguation is just pointless filler. No different than Elizabeth II, really. Peter Isotalo 12:07, 21 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]