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I cannot find any references for "the couple's failure to produce children" (and yes, I looked in the closest citation, which was a book discussing his poetry), but it seems to fit in his poetical style. I just can't find a reference for this; can someone help me locate a viable source? Thanks. [[Special:Contributions/70.181.168.148|70.181.168.148]] ([[User talk:70.181.168.148|talk]]) 02:44, 11 April 2008 (UTC) |
I cannot find any references for "the couple's failure to produce children" (and yes, I looked in the closest citation, which was a book discussing his poetry), but it seems to fit in his poetical style. I just can't find a reference for this; can someone help me locate a viable source? Thanks. [[Special:Contributions/70.181.168.148|70.181.168.148]] ([[User talk:70.181.168.148|talk]]) 02:44, 11 April 2008 (UTC) |
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:If there is no reference for this claim, and I do not recall there being one either, a fact tag should be placed on it. Such a claim has to be sourced. In fact, I will place the fact tag right now. ---<font face="Celtic">[[User:RepublicanJacobite|<span style="color:#009900">RepublicanJacobite</span>]]<sub>''[[User talk:RepublicanJacobite|<span style="color:#006600">The'FortyFive'</span>]]''</sub></font> 03:28, 11 April 2008 (UTC) |
:If there is no reference for this claim, and I do not recall there being one either, a fact tag should be placed on it. Such a claim has to be sourced. In fact, I will place the fact tag right now. ---<font face="Celtic">[[User:RepublicanJacobite|<span style="color:#009900">RepublicanJacobite</span>]]<sub>''[[User talk:RepublicanJacobite|<span style="color:#006600">The'FortyFive'</span>]]''</sub></font> 03:28, 11 April 2008 (UTC) |
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::Thanks so much. Also, I find it interesting that that claim is in here, because it fits in perfectly with his poetical style hinting at marital tensions, and how his poems are always about children, though he never had any. It would be interesting to see if a claim like this is true. [[Special:Contributions/70.181.168.148|70.181.168.148]] ([[User talk:70.181.168.148|talk]]) 02:50, 13 April 2008 (UTC) |
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Music section
Am I the only one who feels that the music section is getting too large and unwieldy? Do we need a notation for every band that ever wrote a song inspired by Blake or which used some of his poetry in the lyrics? Some of these bands, and their works, simply do not seem very notable. Are there any other thoughts on this matter? Is a pruning in order? ---Charles 18:19, 6 May 2007 (UTC)
- I think Blake is unique among major poets in that his work appeals to popular musicians. No other writer comes close in terms of this role linking high and popular culture, especially as his most notable works are themselves like songs. I'm more concerned with the film section which contains ointless passages about someone quoting a bit of Blake once in some movie or tv show, as not doubt they do with any writer you can name. Paul B 19:47, 6 May 2007 (UTC)
- I share your concern about the film section---it is not necessary to list every single mention of Blake in a film. I think all of these cultural references sections need pruning. ---Charles 22:31, 6 May 2007 (UTC)
- Nah, I think we should list everything -- be comprehensive. There's no telling what will be important or not at some future date, and that seems to me the point of an encyclopedia...to be encyclopedic. I wouldn't delete any accurate entry. Jrovira 19:16, 28 July 2007 (UTC)jrovira
Wollstonecraft
Blake illustrated Original Stories from Real Life (1788) by Mary Wollstonecraft. They seem to have shared some views on sexual equality and the institution of marriage, but there is no evidence proving without doubt that they actually met. - I am curious why the editors are emphasizing that there is no evidence proving that Wollstonecraft and Blake met. There is rarely evidence from the eighteenth century proving anything "without a doubt." It seems oddly forceful to me. Why not simply say that they may have met or that it seems likely that they would have met since he illustrated her book but there is no written record of such an encounter if one has to mention personal meetings at all? On the other hand, it might be wise to leave the speculation out and simply focus on the illustrations. See Original Stories from Real Life for a mention of Blake's work and some references. Awadewit Talk 03:53, 19 May 2007 (UTC)
- Scholarly consensus seems to me to be that they did indeed meet, having moved in the same circles, and it is an oft told story that Blake wanted to invite Wollstonecraft into his home as a third member of the household. I'm not sure of the evidence for that last bit (there should be something in Bentley's bio -- will look it up when I can), but most scholars do seem to assume that they had met. They certainly knew quite a few people in common. Jrovira 02:45, 29 July 2007 (UTC)jrovira
Since Paul Barlow went to the trouble of creating an article to deal with references to Blake in popular culture, let's keep new additions to this main article to a minimum. Anything added here should be brief and only of great importance. There is no sense in replicating content. Thanks. ---Cathal 04:27, 20 May 2007 (UTC)
- Hadn't read this comment before posting my one above on music. I agree. Jrovira 02:46, 29 July 2007 (UTC)jrovira
- Blake gets a mention in the winner of the Palme d'Or in 2006, The Wind That Shakes The Barley (film). Specifically, when the IRA volunteers are in the prison cell and Damien reads 'And priests in black gowns were walking their rounds, And binding with briars my joys and desires' from The Garden of Love engraved on the prison cell wall. 86.42.119.173 (talk) 03:39, 4 January 2008 (UTC)
Short Biographical Dictionary of English Literature
Does the article still do this? If not, this can be removed. Awadewit Talk 21:58, 20 May 2007 (UTC)
References
For this sentence:
- William Wordsworth wrote: "There was no doubt that this poor man was mad, but there is something in the madness of this man which interests me more than the sanity of Lord Byron and Walter Scott."
I suggest we reference Henry Crabb Robinson's Diary, Reminiscences and Correspondence, as that's the ultimate source of the quotation.
Jrovira 03:00, 29 July 2007 (UTC)jrovira
- Go ahead and add it. Paul B 10:31, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
- Page is locked for me for editing...Jrovira 18:14, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
Spelling
This article about a Briton should use Commonwealth English spelling (except in direct quotations, proper names, etc.). There are many American English spellings scattered through it, though. For example, this edit replaced "unrecognised" with "unrecognized" without explanation. Isn't "unrecognised" proper CE spelling? (As an American, I'm not completely sure.) Later in the first paragraph, I'm virtually certain that "organized" should be "organised". The quotation from Bindman in the William Blake#Dante's Inferno section uses both "watercolors" and "watercolour", which seems quite improbable to me.
I don't have ready access to Bindman to fix the quotation, and I'm not enough of an expert on CE spelling to know exactly what to change, but somebody should tidy this up. JamesMLane t c 05:26, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
- Yes, it should be in British spelling. Many editors, especially anonymous ones, make changes because they think they are correcting mistakes, being unaware that there are differences between British and US spelling. Others just add passages using the spelling conventions they know for the same reason. Paul B 10:23, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
- OK, I've made changes, but left some passages alone. The situation is complicated by the fact that 'ize' endings are also acceptable in the UK and are even preferred by some publishers. Also Blake's own writings adopt spelling conventions of the time (e.g 'Tyger') which often differ from both modern US and UK spellings. I need to check some of these. Paul B 10:30, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
- The complications you mention are why I decided not to be bold here. Thanks for jumping in! JamesMLane t c 02:56, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
- I checked on Blake's own spelling, and it seems he used 'ize' endings, so "to generalize is to be an idiot" should stay as it is, thus proving Blake's point about the importance of minute particulars! Paul B 00:21, 30 October 2007 (UTC)
Actually we should use Blake's spelling. And punctuation. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Fergus Mixolydian (talk • contribs)
- Not for the article as a whole! Only for quotation from Blake himself. Paul B 09:49, 31 October 2007 (UTC)
"[H]ired to depress art"
An anonymous user added the following line to the "royal academy" section, but I am uncertain as to its provenance:
- He also famously commented on Reynolds: "This man was hired to depress art."
I recognize this statement, and I know that Blake said something very similar. However, I am not certain about whom it was said, what the exact quote is, and I can find no reference for it. Can anyone help? Before it is readded, it should be exact, the target should be known without any doubt, and it should be referenced. ---RepublicanJacobiteThe'FortyFive' 02:41, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
- Plenty here [1] Johnbod (talk) 02:44, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
It's from his marginal annotations to Reynolds's Discourses. Paul B (talk) 08:59, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
'London'
Does this section belong in this article? Surely, it should be moved to a separate article about the poem itself, or about Songs of Innocence and Experience? The section was riddled with overly emotive phrases, which contained no citations and were too repetitive. Citations were poor, including one to a Yahoo answers discussion - I might be being too picky, but this doesn't seem a good enough source to cite in an encyclopedia article. Were it up to me, I'd purge the section and move the content to the Songs article. Any thoughts or objections? Visual Error (talk) 12:12, 6 January 2008 (UTC)
- Actually, if no one objects, I'm going to move this section to the article about 'London'. Visual Error (talk) 14:28, 6 January 2008 (UTC)
- Your edit here popping up on my watchlist has just reminded me to investigate User:Boykovladimir who made the addition. IIRC he also added what were considered spam external links to professional essay writing websites (Special:Contributions/Boykovladimir), so that might explain the style of writing - essay style rather than encyclopedia style. Feel free to give it a good copyedit. -- John (Daytona2 · Talk · Contribs) 16:07, 6 January 2008 (UTC)
- Reckon I will. I'll simply get rid of anything that isn't properly cited, unless it looks like a good citation could be found - I'll also see if I can find the links mentioned in the brackets, and then move it to the London article.91.125.12.124 (talk) 15:21, 7 January 2008 (UTC)
- Thought you might be interested, John , re: suspect submissions - the citation for "restrictions on the freedom of speech and the mobilisation of foreign mercenary soldiers" doesn't seem to be the BBC. A google search points towards here: [striak.de/Postcolonialism/THE%20TYGER.doc] - it's a Word document, and there's no reference to it on the BBC website that I can find, though maybe it's an old page that's been taken down. Not in the google cache, though. Visual Error (talk) 15:30, 7 January 2008 (UTC)
- Your edit here popping up on my watchlist has just reminded me to investigate User:Boykovladimir who made the addition. IIRC he also added what were considered spam external links to professional essay writing websites (Special:Contributions/Boykovladimir), so that might explain the style of writing - essay style rather than encyclopedia style. Feel free to give it a good copyedit. -- John (Daytona2 · Talk · Contribs) 16:07, 6 January 2008 (UTC)
- In fact the comment on the word 'chartered' is in error. The word has nothing to do with mapping. That's "charted" not "chartered". Also, in this period one of the most common meanings of 'chartered' was 'freighted' - that is laden. It appears in this meaning in Wordsworth, "And let the chartered wind that sweeps the heath/Beat his grey locks against his withered face", where chartered seems to mean "heavy". This differs from the meaning "controlled by a charter granting exclusive rights". Paul B (talk) 16:43, 7 January 2008 (UTC)
- Noted - I'll remove the reference. 91.125.12.124 (talk) 17:39, 7 January 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks everyone, your experiences match mine elsewhere, when I investigated the references on the articles he created. I Wikipedia:Assume good faith initially, prompting this post Wikipedia:Village_pump_(assistance)#How_to_handle_-_users_essay_style_writing_.26_vague_cites but I'm now persuaded that it is up to him to prove his case and that until then all his contributions should be removed/userfied. I believe that deliberately vague but plausible references have been given and that these are false. -- John (Daytona2 · Talk · Contribs) 18:31, 7 January 2008 (UTC)
British Israelite beliefs
Did Blake have British Israelite beliefs?Wool Bridge (talk) 23:23, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
- No. There is no evidence of that. He knew the writings of Jacob Bryant, which he expressed agreement with in his 1809 Descriptive Catalogue. Bryant believed that the British were among the descendents of Ham, not Shem (British Israelism) or Japheth (the standard genealogical model at the time). Paul B (talk) 23:32, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
- No, I've never seen any indication of that either. ---RepublicanJacobiteThe'FortyFive' 23:34, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
This chap Joseph Mac Dermott would probably beg to differ. He gave a lecture on 'William Blake and the British Israelite Tradition'.
I did not hear it but there is something about it here on this site:
http://www.lecturelist.org/content/view_lecture/3424
Wool Bridge (talk) 14:19, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
- This chap is a building restorer, not an accredited scholar, and the "Research Into Lost Knowledge Organisation" is not a reliable source. Paul B (talk) 15:30, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
Yes I gathered that they are not scholars but that does not make them necessarily wrong. Blake was not an accredited scholar either! There are more examples of the foolishness of scholars throughout the ages than the reverse. Briitish israelite beliefs amongst the English and Anglo Saxon protestants from the time of Cromwell onwards are common. While there may not be a direct smoking gun evidence, if someone like Newton for example is poring over the books of Daniel or Ezekiel looking for the date that The Jews will return to their homeland in order to work out when the second coming will be, it can safely be assumed that he is under the influence of British Israelite ideas. If you are not convinced then please offer your evidence to the contrary.Wool Bridge (talk) 17:25, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
Suggested rewrite
I'd like to pre-empt the direction this page seems to be going, and suggest a division of the article into three sections: Blake's biography; his work, both as artist and poet (the two, of course, are nigh-on inseparable in this case); and his primary concerns as an artist (such as 'Blake and Religion', a section that already exists, and 'Blake and sexual politics', which ought to). The problem to overcome is the fact that this article is getting confused, with arbitrary works of Blake's being inserted into his biography, such as Dante's Inferno, which appears chronologically in the right place, but which spoils the flow of the biography it intrudes upon.
The split I suggest would allow the article to function as it probably ought, as a detail of Blake's biographical details, his milieu, and a brief introduction to his major works, the latter concern operating as a direct hub to related articles. Of course, the biography section would touch upon Blake's works, but I think critical discussion of these is best left to the specific articles in question. Additions made would also have a clear place to go, rather than being plonked where they don't really cohere. In addition to all this, the article really needs a shake up, to reach A-grade status. Are there any objections or queries?
If not, I suggest that an alternative version of the article be set up (such as 'William Blake rewrite'), which could then be worked on at a reasonable pace by those who were interested.Visual Error (talk) 18:21, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
Failure to produce children?
- "There were early problems such as Catherine's illiteracy and the couple's failure to produce children."
I cannot find any references for "the couple's failure to produce children" (and yes, I looked in the closest citation, which was a book discussing his poetry), but it seems to fit in his poetical style. I just can't find a reference for this; can someone help me locate a viable source? Thanks. 70.181.168.148 (talk) 02:44, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
- If there is no reference for this claim, and I do not recall there being one either, a fact tag should be placed on it. Such a claim has to be sourced. In fact, I will place the fact tag right now. ---RepublicanJacobiteThe'FortyFive' 03:28, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks so much. Also, I find it interesting that that claim is in here, because it fits in perfectly with his poetical style hinting at marital tensions, and how his poems are always about children, though he never had any. It would be interesting to see if a claim like this is true. 70.181.168.148 (talk) 02:50, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
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