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== Article Selection == |
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=== [[Urban climate|Urban Climate]] === |
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The article's content is relevant to the topic: it incorporates subtopics such as temperature, precipitation, wind and humidity,and how they contribute to an urban climate. However, each section lacks substantial detail (i.e. one to two sentences), making it difficult to generate strong points. The article is written neutrally but each claim did not have a citation. There are only three in-text citations/ references: two references were used for one sentence in the introduction and one for a sentence in the temperature subsection. Many claims were made throughout the article, especially in the different subtopic sections. For instance, "Building materials have a lower [[Specific heat capacity|specific heat capacity]] (the amount of energy that will heat a kilogram of a material by 1 °C) than grass and trees—the specific heat capacity of concrete is 800 [[Joule|Joules]]/kg whereas for soil it can be 2000 Joules/kg, so concrete heats up more quickly in the day, warming the air around it."<ref>{{Citation|title=Urban climate|date=2018-07-01|url=https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Urban_climate&oldid=848311351|work=Wikipedia|language=en|access-date=2019-02-10}}</ref> This is a very specific claim that would have came from a source of some kind which was not referenced at all. Two of the citations are from peer-reviewed journals and one is from the Royal Swedish Academy of Sciences, so they are reliable sources of information but the article requires more referencing for the information proposed. |
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== References == |
== References == |
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Article Evaluation
Notes
- Some relevant information
- Proposes that surface drying/ deforestation/ excessive grazing (etc.) impact climate change; rather than global warming causing these land surface changes[1]
- Article references range from 2006 to 2016 (with the exception of one that was dated 1975)
- The Land surface effects on climate overview is brief and vague
- The second sentence is incomplete; it did not identify the significant role of deforestation and exploitation of natural landscapes[1]
- Deforestation is not made a link the first time it is introduced in the article
- No referencing in information stated under the subheadings: Orographic lift and Rain shadow
- The information needs to be elaborated on to develop a better understanding
- The article is neutral: references the journal of Atmospheric Chemistry and Physics and papers published by the American Institute of Biological Sciences before paraphrasing the information; the article does not draw conclusions or personal ideas
- The view points appear to be underrepresented
Article Selection
The article's content is relevant to the topic: it incorporates subtopics such as temperature, precipitation, wind and humidity,and how they contribute to an urban climate. However, each section lacks substantial detail (i.e. one to two sentences), making it difficult to generate strong points. The article is written neutrally but each claim did not have a citation. There are only three in-text citations/ references: two references were used for one sentence in the introduction and one for a sentence in the temperature subsection. Many claims were made throughout the article, especially in the different subtopic sections. For instance, "Building materials have a lower specific heat capacity (the amount of energy that will heat a kilogram of a material by 1 °C) than grass and trees—the specific heat capacity of concrete is 800 Joules/kg whereas for soil it can be 2000 Joules/kg, so concrete heats up more quickly in the day, warming the air around it."[2] This is a very specific claim that would have came from a source of some kind which was not referenced at all. Two of the citations are from peer-reviewed journals and one is from the Royal Swedish Academy of Sciences, so they are reliable sources of information but the article requires more referencing for the information proposed.
References
- ^ a b "Land surface effects on climate", Wikipedia, 2019-01-15, retrieved 2019-02-09
- ^ "Urban climate", Wikipedia, 2018-07-01, retrieved 2019-02-10