User contributions for 37.152.231.22

12 May 2020

• 09:2309:23, 12 May 2020 diff hist −38‎ 2002 Australian Grand Prix ‎ more times formatted in accordance with the manual of style
• 09:2109:21, 12 May 2020 diff hist −61‎ 2002 Australian Grand Prix ‎ →‎Practice: MOS:NUMERAL
• 09:1909:19, 12 May 2020 diff hist +10‎ 2002 Australian Grand Prix ‎ →‎Background: previous did not make sense.
• 09:1709:17, 12 May 2020 diff hist −19‎ 2002 Australian Grand Prix ‎ Undid revision 956242838 by MWright96 (talk) yes it is Tag: Undo
• 09:1509:15, 12 May 2020 diff hist −8‎ Lists of named passenger trains ‎No edit summary
• 09:1509:15, 12 May 2020 diff hist +5‎ Christchurch ‎ →‎2010–2012 earthquakes: earthquakes don't have locations; their epicentres do. misc other fixes, removing redundant words
• 09:1009:10, 12 May 2020 diff hist −27‎ Paul Heaton ‎ basic grammar fixes, and why on earth did it start with an isolated sentence? That's extremely poor style.
• 09:0809:08, 12 May 2020 diff hist −226‎ Tomisaku Kawasaki ‎ →‎Life: again, can't use a pronoun if the reference has not been established. removed incomprehensible text, formatted citation properly.
• 09:0509:05, 12 May 2020 diff hist +9‎ Tomisaku Kawasaki ‎ →‎Kawasaki disease: you can't use "him" in a context where you haven't previously identified the person
• 09:0209:02, 12 May 2020 diff hist −1‎ Marc Secara ‎No edit summary
• 09:0109:01, 12 May 2020 diff hist −3‎ She's the One (World Party song) ‎ →‎Other versions: fixed grammar errors, and citations are needed
• 09:0009:00, 12 May 2020 diff hist −67‎ She's the One (World Party song) ‎ →‎Music video: removed nonsensical text taking a music video absurdly seriously. citations are needed.
• 08:5808:58, 12 May 2020 diff hist +54‎ She's the One (World Party song) ‎ chart position noted
• 08:5708:57, 12 May 2020 diff hist −21‎ She's the One (World Party song) ‎ improved tone
• 08:5608:56, 12 May 2020 diff hist +760‎ Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents ‎ →‎Account used for vandalism and spamming: new section
• 08:4808:48, 12 May 2020 diff hist −248‎ Julia McKenzie ‎ removed garbage added by a vandal more than a year ago Tag: references removed
• 08:4408:44, 12 May 2020 diff hist +7‎ HTML5 ‎ →‎W3C and WHATWG conflict: "recognizing" implies that this is "true"
• 08:4308:43, 12 May 2020 diff hist −5‎ HTML5 ‎No edit summary
• 08:4108:41, 12 May 2020 diff hist 0‎ Devil facial tumour disease ‎ →‎History
• 08:4108:41, 12 May 2020 diff hist 0‎ Devil facial tumour disease ‎ →‎Clinical signs
• 08:4008:40, 12 May 2020 diff hist −2‎ Devil facial tumour disease ‎ →‎Clinical signs: you just used the term in the previous sentence; using it again immediately is very poor style
• 08:4008:40, 12 May 2020 diff hist +3‎ Clonally transmissible cancer ‎ →‎Humans: same; and grammar
• 08:3908:39, 12 May 2020 diff hist +9‎ Clonally transmissible cancer ‎ →‎Humans: MOS:NUMERAL
• 08:3808:38, 12 May 2020 diff hist −76‎ Freycinet National Park ‎ removed nonsense about "several travel authorities"
• 08:3508:35, 12 May 2020 diff hist +1‎ Martin Bryant ‎No edit summary
• 08:3508:35, 12 May 2020 diff hist −82‎ Martin Bryant ‎ removed statement of obvious
• 08:3408:34, 12 May 2020 diff hist −491‎ Port Arthur, Tasmania ‎ →‎Conservation management: removed badly written crystal balling about sea levels. it is true but vague statements about the future are not useful here. Tag: references removed
• 08:3108:31, 12 May 2020 diff hist −51‎ Port Arthur, Tasmania ‎ style fixing; removed redundant sentence; direct quotes must be attributed inline; if you name the town in the first sentence, you do not need to name it again in the second one.
• 08:2608:26, 12 May 2020 diff hist −19‎ Tasmania ‎ →‎Recent history
• 08:2508:25, 12 May 2020 diff hist −519‎ Mars Exploration Rover ‎ fixed very poor opening paragraph, which named the rovers twice, used bold face unnecessarily, and used citation tags not to allow the reader to verify anything but merely to link to external websites. Tag: references removed
• 08:2108:21, 12 May 2020 diff hist −166‎ 1997 Spanish Grand Prix ‎ →‎Race Summary: "great start" is not neutral; "lap times" does not contain a hyphen; using the word "leader" twice in one sentence is poor style; removed trivia
• 08:1808:18, 12 May 2020 diff hist −16‎ London1 novel CoV/2012 ‎No edit summary
• 08:1608:16, 12 May 2020 diff hist −19‎ 2002 Australian Grand Prix ‎ →‎Qualifying: MOS:NUM
• 08:1308:13, 12 May 2020 diff hist −41‎ Raindrops Keep Fallin' on My Head ‎ →‎Personnel: totally pointless fragment. this is stated correctly elsewhere Tag: section blanking
• 08:1208:12, 12 May 2020 diff hist −200‎ ʻAta ‎ grammar and style
• 08:0708:07, 12 May 2020 diff hist −50‎ The Abominable Bride ‎ →‎Filming: removed uncited, badly written trivia
• 08:0608:06, 12 May 2020 diff hist −10‎ The Graduate ‎ →‎Casting
• 08:0508:05, 12 May 2020 diff hist −37‎ The Graduate ‎ →‎Casting
• 08:0208:02, 12 May 2020 diff hist −38‎ Atlantic hurricane season ‎No edit summary
• 08:0008:00, 12 May 2020 diff hist −4‎ Johannes Vermeer ‎ →‎Pronunciation of name
• 07:5907:59, 12 May 2020 diff hist −5‎ Government of Tulsa, Oklahoma ‎ →‎History
• 07:5907:59, 12 May 2020 diff hist −12‎ Modern Standard Arabic ‎No edit summary
• 07:3907:39, 12 May 2020 diff hist +28‎ Talk:Lists of mountains and hills in the British Isles ‎ →‎Grammar and style: reproduced formatting from guideline page
• 07:3707:37, 12 May 2020 diff hist +840‎ User talk:Swarm ‎ →‎Appeal for help: new section
• 07:2907:29, 12 May 2020 diff hist +997‎ User talk:37.152.231.22 ‎ →‎Oh and...
• 07:2907:29, 12 May 2020 diff hist +289‎ User talk:37.152.231.22 ‎ →‎More vandalism
• 07:2907:29, 12 May 2020 diff hist +3,267‎ Talk:Lists of mountains and hills in the British Isles ‎ →‎Courtesy
• 07:2907:29, 12 May 2020 diff hist −3,064‎ Lists of mountains and hills in the British Isles ‎ rv vandalism. Correct grammar is not negotiable. If you do not know how to use the word "however", you must defer to those who do. If you have not familiarised yourself with basic policies and guidelines, you must defer to those who have.

9 May 2020

• 14:5714:57, 9 May 2020 diff hist +44‎ User talk:37.152.231.22 ‎ →‎More vandalism
• 14:5614:56, 9 May 2020 diff hist +445‎ User talk:37.152.231.22 ‎ →‎More vandalism: new section