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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by 39.50.22.225 (talk) at 02:44, 15 April 2022 (→‎Wrong fact and date: new section). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Maryam Nawaz/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 02:44, 20 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • Unfortunately, this article does not appear to me ready to be listed as Good Article. The biggest problem is that the article is tremendously short, and doesn't appear to make full use of its linked sources. The reader does not get a full overview of Nawaz's life, even such major events as being put under house arrest[1], or her political views. On the other hand, the article dwells on her charity work without providing a reliable source for her involvement in these projects.
  • Another problem is that the article has a clearly non-neutral tone. The family's charity work is promoted in detail without a reliable source for Nawaz's direct involvement, and Nawaz's "vital role in the establishment of higher education in Punjab" both seems unlikely and is unsourced. "respectable and renowned" is direct editorializing.
  • I'd suggest that to become a Good Article, this should be dramatically expanded from reliable sources like the ones currently cited in the article to give a fuller picture of Nawaz's life. As a politician, it's particularly important that all claims related to her come from reliable secondary sources, not from charities run by her family. Thanks for your work on this, and good luck on expanding this! -- Khazar2 (talk) 02:54, 20 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Ayeza Khan== Semi-protected edit request on 23 February 2021 ==

She is convicted by courts in Pakistan.it should be on wikipedia. Mzubair81 (talk) 22:11, 23 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

All the details regarding her case should be on Wikipedia. Mzubair81 (talk) 22:12, 23 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate.  Ganbaruby! (Say hi!) 02:45, 24 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 6 March 2021

Arslajab (talk) 07:46, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Date Of Married Is 25 Dec 1992

 Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made.J850NK (talk) 09:00, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 22 May 2021

MuhammadAmjad5434452 (talk) 08:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ayeza Khan

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate.  Ganbaruby! (talk) 09:56, 22 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Wrong fact and date

In education of maryam nawaz Wikipedia write that she left medical college in 1980 and date of birth mentioned 1973. A 7years old child can't get admission in medical school. In Pakistan you need to complete 12 years of education and a child get admission in early school at age of 5. Wikipedia largly publish wrong facts. 39.50.22.225 (talk) 02:44, 15 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]