User talk:KRCPhilmon

Karolina,

I noticed that your biography is on your user page. Do not forget to move it to your sandbox so that yours won't get deleted as mine did a few weeks ago. Just a friendly suggestion!

Being Digital Peer Review

Hey Karolina! So I know you're working the page Being Digital and seeing as the professor wanted us to do a peer review and post it to someone's talk page I figured I'd do it here (while addressing your whole group).

So here are some pros concerning the page:

1: The page has a strong opening that encapsulates the book as a whole. 2: The page presents a very nice general information about the text. 3: As far as I could tell there is very little in terms of grammatical errors and spelling errors and finally 4: All of the references for the page follow the standard for Wikipedia

Now there is one glaring error for the page as a whole and it mostly concerns the final paragraph and the last sentence of the opening. The page has a hard time keeping the information neutral, it likes to sing the praises of the author of the text and talks about things in context of amazement and wonder, while normally this would be ok but for a Wikipedia article it doesn't work. If you and your group could somehow fix the page to be just neutral from start to finish your page would be improved by an immense amount. Keep up the good work and I hope the page comes out well!