Talk:1882 Navy Midshipmen football team/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: Dom497 (talk · contribs) 02:04, 20 June 2013 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- No pictures in article.
- B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- No pictures in article.
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
Comments[edit]
- "However, even with the expansion, Princeton dominated the game, being declared the champion eight times in ten years." - Does ref 2 support this? Because the ref can't be accessed from a readers point of view, if ref 2 does indeed support this, place another footnote at the end of this sentence.--Dom497 (talk) 02:15, 20 June 2013 (UTC)
- Footnotes added after the sentence. It is now backed up by refs 2 and 3.
- For the table, call me stupid but I think some readers may not understand why the "Attendance" section is blank. Maybe add a note like you did for the location saying that the figure is not known?--Dom497 (talk) 02:15, 20 June 2013 (UTC)
- Endnote added.
That's all....great work! I will pass the article once these two points are addressed.--Dom497 (talk) 02:15, 20 June 2013 (UTC)
- I've addressed your two concerns. Thanks for the review. - Awardgive. Help out with Project Fillmore County 05:02, 20 June 2013 (UTC)