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Thanks for creating this article. Many improvements are needed, mainly wikilinks, and, crucially, verifiability; please see Wikipedia:Citing sources. Not addressing the issues may cause the article to be converted to a draft. —Alalch E. 12:56, 1 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Btw, did you want to create this as a draft? Your initial summary seems to call this a draft. —Alalch E. 13:55, 1 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Some sources

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Shayno: Here are just a few sources to support some of the prose. You will need more but must provide published third-party reliable sources for the whole article. Otherwise the article will be rejected. You should also see if you can find the official accident report.

Good luck. ww2censor (talk) 12:22, 2 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Alalch E.: I had originally pinged you but then realised you were not the creator. I did not know his topic either but it's really up to Shayno to fix it before submitting for review, but I might just add some citations to get it on it's way because it seems like a worthy topic. Time is the only problem. ww2censor (talk) 13:48, 2 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I agree. I'll try to help. Shayno probably annotated his sources at the end of a sentence/paragraph, in square brackets. But we don't know (but may be able to figure out) what the letters mean. —Alalch E. 14:32, 2 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hey guys, I've got a list of sources ready to go, including the official accident report. The square brackets are indeed my own annotations. I'll fill it out over the next week or so and give you a shout for a review before we move it of draft. Thanks for your help! Shayno (talk) 22:47, 2 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft submitted

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@Alalch E. @Ww2censor I've submitted for review. Thanks for your input so far. If you'd like to go over it yourselves that would be very helpful. I'm sure there's lots to improve! Shayno (talk) 23:03, 7 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Cool. I've made some cosmetic changes.—Alalch E. 23:30, 7 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]