Talk:2011–12 Princeton Tigers men's basketball team/GA1
If I remembered right, I reviewed Harvard when Princeton went to the big dance last year, so naturally with Harvard making it in this year, I'll review Princeton. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:48, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
Here are my issues:
- "With a new head coach for the team and a head coach who is a first-time head coach, the team got off to slow starts." Can be cleaned up. Maybe simply "With a new first-time head coach, the team got.."
- "game against the 2011–12 Quakers. Princeton's victory " what was the score? It's in the table but no reason not to have it in the prose in this case.
- "Princeton's victory enabled it to retain slim 26–25 and 24–23 leads in terms of Ivy League Championships and Ivy League team NCAA Tournament appearances, respectively." I'm a bit confused here. I presume it's meant that Princeton has one more championship than Penn, but if that's the case then this game wouldn't factor in. Perhaps changing it to "enabled them to hold on to slim.." would be better just so it doesn't sound like the game decided the championship.