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I am a Wikipedia community member and am trying to improve this entry. While I've read the Wiki Tutorial, I'm just wondering if a Wiki editor might tell me the most egregious mistakes with this entry in its current state. I'm going to attempt to remove the Peacock terms and make the article more neutral overall. But other suggestions are welcome. Thanks for any info. Chip Grabow —Preceding unsigned comment added by Grabowc (talk • contribs) 15:37, 5 February 2010 (UTC)