Talk:Adolescents and food marketing

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It's own section[edit]

I think that you should take the section from the intro about the differences in children and make it it's own section in the article. It just seems a bit wordy and specific to be part of the introduction. Jtobyne —Preceding undated comment added 00:52, 29 March 2012 (UTC).


Hi Nicole! So, I made a few minor edits to your page (still working on it now)...but wasn't logged in. Jeesh. Anyway, I added some more to my article if you want to check it out. P.S. Thanks for your help with the links! Chalbeis (talk) 02:46, 19 April 2012 (UTC)


Really good expansion since the last time I looked at your article you have added a lot of information. My only suggestion would be maybe adding more to the brand relationship section, I just feel like there is a lot of information out there on it because it is turning into such a hot button issue. Jtobyne 23 April 2012 —Preceding undated comment added 18:45, 23 April 2012 (UTC).

title[edit]

You folks should consider a different title for this article. It doesn't strictly appear to be about adolescents only, and title case should not be used unless proper nouns are involved. I'd move the article myself if I had the solution: "Food marketing and children", "Food marketing to children", "Food marketing to children and adolescents", "... to youth", etc. Riggr Mortis (talk) 20:50, 2 May 2012 (UTC)