Talk:Ahuvah Gray

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Neutral Point of View[edit]

I've noticed that some of this article may not represent a neutral point of view, in as such it seems to promote one religion over another - whilst the statement about her preferring the Torah over the NT is all well and good, does it really need to be made twice? It also seems to contain a number of peacock phrases, such as "She has written a fascinating book" and "She is also a world renown lecturer; once a year she travels the world, inspiring many". Statements like these need to be expanded on - for example, how is her book fascinating, for what is she world-reknowned, who exactly has she inspired? Bettia (rawr!) 15:42, 10 December 2008 (UTC)


A deletion of a passing mention, as here, does not seem appropriate to me. There are various things that do not count towards notability (such as a passing mention, or a primary source) that are perfectly appropriate for inclusion in articles. --Epeefleche (talk) 00:15, 9 July 2014 (UTC)