- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- Image is good. That is really interesting that Bowman's trading cards fell into PD.
- References are good, spotcheck reveals they support their statements; no issues with close paraphrasing
- Seems odd that being a member of a World Series champion is not listed in the lead
- Minor leagues
- "where he spent the season as the team's second baseman and played with future teammate Vic Raschi." - Odd to state that he was playing with a future teammate since the two were obviously also current teammates. Perhaps specify future major league teammate?
- Major leagues
- We are told that Clark played in the 1947 World Series, but we aren't told the result of the series.
- Likewise, we're informed of the 1948 tiebreaker, but the result is only implied, and again, being on the 1948 World Series champ is not noted.
Obviously, only a very minor concern about specifically noting he was on WS winning teams. I just want to get your thought on this before passing the article. Regards, Resolute 23:10, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- Issues fixed, added WS notes where needed. Indeed, once we found out Bowman fell into PD it's helped our 40s-50s articles out tremendously. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:39, 23 September 2012 (UTC)