Talk:Andrei Nikolayevich Bolkonsky

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"He leaves his pregnant wife, Lise..."[edit]

The phrase "He leaves his pregnant wife, Lise, to live at Bald Hills in the countryside with his father and sister, while he goes to war" is a little confusing. It implies that Bolkonsky abandoned his wife so that he himself could live in the countryside with his father and sister. I changed it to "When he goes to war, he leaves his pregnant wife, Lise, at Bald Hills in the countryside with his father and sister." Hope this is okay.Sadiemonster (talk) 11:51, 4 September 2015 (UTC)