Talk:Anti-sweatshop movement

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New Edits[edit]

Hi so there seems to not really be much happening in this page, but I'll be making several substantial edits to the page. If you have any suggestions, please let me know. Also if you know how to keep "Anti-Sweatshop Movement" (all caps) from redirecting to "Sweatshops" that would be greatly appreciated Abergin13 (talk) 01:39, 26 February 2016 (UTC)

Suggestions for Improvement[edit]

Hi! I really enjoyed reading your article. The main things I think you need to focus on are fixing your grammatical errors and adding more detail to each of your sections. If possible, it would be great for each section to have a couple of subsections, each illustrated by corresponding pictures. You seem to be on track and I look forward to seeing how you continue to edit this article! Athomas1995 (talk) 07:07, 7 March 2016 (UTC)

Further Suggestions[edit]

The article looks really good! The main areas of improvement are to add pictures and to add more detail to each of the sections, particularly the Criticisms of sweatshops and Contemporary anti-sweatshop movement sections. Keep up the good work! OLucier (talk) 18:32, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

removed sentence[edit]

seems irrelevant to the article as a whole:

Mayor Boyle always gave full credit for the idea to his Wife Nancy Wlodarski. He also said that it was important that the legislation started in a middle class suburban community since it demonstrated that all Americans, regardless of fantasy divisions, believed their “neighbors” should be loved and protected regardless of political and geographic distinctions.

Moscowamerican (talk) 05:18, 9 July 2016 (UTC)