Talk:Ard Matthews

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Tone problems[edit]

This article is not written like an encyclopedia article. E.g. "his indelible lyrics and melody arrangements led the way to the incredible success of their debut album". It's written like a magazine article. Poor stuff. (talk) 15:21, 17 May 2012 (UTC)

Tone problems as mentioned above have been rectified and/or removed in accordance with the Wikipedia tone guidelines. Lomax69 (talk) 23:46, 18 July 2012 (UTC)

Tone problems still a problem[edit]

I agree with above user. A poorly written article that sounds more like a magazine article. using words like grom isn't very Wikipedia like. (talk) 15:22, 20 August 2012 (UTC)