Talk:Bipolar disorder not otherwise specified
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I feel like you could add lots more details. This disorder seems like it would be very scary since you can't control your own moods. You should go more into detail about treatment since that's a common want among people who suffer from Bipolar. I feel like you have a few good points, but it would be a much better article if you added details. I think it would be cool if you researched what it's like to have bipolar, then make a "day in the life" article. That way people would really understand what it's like to have to deal with bipolar. — comment added by ClaireESchuster (talk • contribs) 16 September 2011 (UTC)
The article could use more details. It should go into how people deal with the disorder and the type of treatments or medication that people can take who have the disorder. It should be something that informal and easy to read something that people with the disorder can relate to.Editing Bipolar NOS --Cierra 22:11, 18 September 2011 (UTC)KillaCece--Cierra 22:11, 18 September 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Killa Cece (talk • contribs)
Just added a sentence
I felt that knowing the percentage of people with Bipolar NOS is not only interesting, but a very important statistic. Otherwise the contributions of Jtiller11 was a great addition to the article.
I edited part of your sentence to allow it to flow for the reader, it was good information, i feel as though that there could be more statistics added into the site Rameyer13 (talk) 02:05, 10 October 2011 (UTC)
Please review WP:MEDRS and Wikipedia:Wikipedia Signpost/2008-06-30/Dispatches for understanding sourcing of medical articles. Here are just a couple of samples of free full-text recent secondary reviews that might be useful:
- Filaković P, Erić AP, Požgain I (2011). "New strategies in the treatment of bipolar disorder" (PDF). Psychiatr Danub. 23 (3): 293–9. PMID 21963700. Unknown parameter
- Leboyer M, Kupfer DJ (2010). "Bipolar disorder: new perspectives in health care and prevention". J Clin Psychiatry. 71 (12): 1689–95. doi:10.4088/JCP.10m06347yel. PMC . PMID 21190640. Unknown parameter
There are plenty of reviews available in PubMed and no need to resort to sub-optimal or primary sources here.
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