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Firstly I have made this a low importance page, lets be honest here its not greatly significant to the Yorkshire project.
I have removed a lot of offending text. Do not use terms like 'the school has strong links', use something like 'the school has links' or 'the school maintains links'. After all who is to be the judge of whether they are strong/ good / positive etc? I have removed a lot of nonsense which sounds like it came straight from the school prospectus (do schools have prospectus'?). This should be unbiased. Do not make sections regarding the stated aims of the school, as many may beg to differ. To be honest, a page on a school requires little text as there is generally little that is both pertinant and verifiable to be written.
I have left the tags on the page, if it is not verified soon, I shall come back and clean up the article.