Talk:C. Henry Kempe

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Withdrawing CSD request as the page has now been updated with material--Fbifriday (talk) 22:36, 25 November 2009 (UTC)

Re-wording needed.[edit]

Several sections in this article are poorly worded and give an impression that is hopefully unintentional. For instance, one section appears to identify child abuse "within the medical community" giving the impression that it's child abuse "by the medical community".Daffydavid (talk) 12:36, 16 September 2011 (UTC)

Fixed wording of two sentences. "Safer" is debatable in regards to smallpox vaccine, less side effects for people with skin conditions seems clear but study was incomplete. Suggest re-wording this.Daffydavid (talk) 12:44, 16 September 2011 (UTC)

Sourcing[edit]

This sourcing is incredibly poor. There is a book on Kempe's legacy that is appropriate reference material, and much of the information here may be true, but it's improperly referenced as it is right now. -- [ UseTheCommandLine ~/talk ] # _ 04:42, 3 August 2013 (UTC)