Talk:Cardiac arrest

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Peer Review[edit]

Hi Josh! Great work editing this article, especially since its probably one of the more time-intensive topics to look into.

-You did a great job avoiding jargon in the 'causes' section and using links to additional Wikipedia articles for further information on the arrhythmias discussed.

-It might be helpful to include a bulleted list of the causes of cardiac arrest before going on to explain each one

-Under CAD, the article mentions LVH as a leading cause of SCD. While this is probably true, you could move it down to the next section which discusses structural heart disease not related to CAD.

-Since you included a link to the article on Long QT syndrome, you could consider removing the description of long QT included under arrhythmias to streamline the article some.

-There are a few instances where the article seems to use primary articles (under the ICD section). May want to find higher level evidence for this information. Instead of referencing trials (ie MADIT-II trial) that can't be searched in Wikipedia, you could try summarizing some of the criteria that would qualify a patient for ICDs.

-The section under Targeted Temp Management also seems to cite a few primary articles. This area could use some summarizing instead of presenting so many statistics. Same with the "other" section

-The Epidemiology section seems out of place. You might want to move it earlier in the article.

-This article is pretty comprehensive. Overall, great job! If you wanted to pick one section to focus on, I would probably choose to clean up the 'management' section.

Lindseyshehee (talk) 16:14, 10 December 2017 (UTC)