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The writeup is so clearly intended to promote the documentary as it goes on about how great it is...doesn't really contribute anything to the actual subject. It's spam. ⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 23:07, 15 October 2008 (UTC)
Part of "Marie's rumored pregnancy by Charlie" section is hard to make sense of.
When one reads this: "Stella said that at the funeral for the Lawsons she had overheard Fannie's sisters-in-law and aunts, including Stella's mother Jettie Lawson, discussing how Fannie Lawson had confided in them that she had been concerned about an incestuous relationship between Charlie and Marie" it sounds like they were discussing this at the funeral for the murder victims however then we read this: "Jettie died in early 1928, meaning Fannie had been suspicious of the incest at least that long before the murders in late 1929" - How exactly was Jettie at the funerals for the victims if she had died over a year before? Was this discussed at the murder victims' funeral or at Jettie's funeral? Or someone else's funeral? If it was the funeral for the victims, then how did a dead woman attend? Or is her death year wrong? (The linked newspaper article does not mention said discussion, etc)