Talk:Circulatory system

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New sections(s) - homeostasis, types of blood, types of arteries, etc.[edit]

Seems to me that while this article does a good job of defining the different types of circulatory systems, it does very little to go in-depth with them. The section on its discovery is longer than them, for Heaven's sake. So, I propose a new section dealing with the specificities of each type of circulatory system.

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Semi-protected edit request on 13 March 2017[edit]

Please change The cardiovascular (from Latin words meaning "heart" and "vessel") system comprises the blood, heart, and blood vessels.[3] The lymph, lymph nodes, and lymph vessels form the lymphatic system, which returns filtered blood plasma from the interstitial fluid (between cells) as lymph to

The cardiovascular (from Latin words meaning "heart" and "vessel") system comprises the blood, heart, blood vessels[3], lymph, lymph nodes, and lymph vessels form the lymphatic system, which returns filtered blood plasma from the interstitial fluid (between cells) as lymph. 67.230.33.160 (talk) 20:29, 13 March 2017 (UTC)
Not done: Your proposed wording seems ungrammatical and confusing. Maybe you misstated it? RivertorchFIREWATER 03:19, 14 March 2017 (UTC)

Navbox Anatomy of the heart[edit]

The navbox {{Heart anatomy}} which is included in this article does not have Circulatory system as one of its navigation links. I am not part of the relevant project, so I hesitate to edit the navbox. • • • Peter (Southwood) (talk): 05:07, 3 June 2017 (UTC)

I just checked, and this seems to be a problem with most of the navboxes in the article. It is clear that thy are appropriate, so I will fix them. • • • Peter (Southwood) (talk): 05:14, 3 June 2017 (UTC)