Talk:Ciright Systems

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Advertisement?[edit]

I don't think this page needs a re-write, just a few edits. I deleted a lot of the sales-pitch like language the author had added and tried to make it more neutral. Changed outline title from "Features" to "Product Specifications." I also added a reference to support the claims about C Programming and reliable interfaces, to show that this is a supported fact and not a matter of opinion or attempt at promotion. Are those without a background in programming able to understand it, or does anyone think it should be edited for that too? Rachael erin (talk) 20:07, 7 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I don't think this is written like an advertisement, at least not any more. I've compared it to other articles about technology companies and it seems to be pretty similar. Appenzel (talk) 19:23, 14 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Major changes have been made since the page was tagged as an advertisement. A lot of material from the website that was included for extra information was removed as it could be perceived as promotional in nature. This includes the product specifications and technologies. Anyone have any ideas improve this article so hopefully an admin will remove the advert tag? Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by GPfeiffer (talk • contribs) 16:08, 10 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Newcomer to Wikipedia[edit]

This was my first experience with adding an article to Wikipedia.... I first learned of Ciright years ago, when I was studying Entrepreneurship at the Wharton School in Philly. I have kept in contact with the founder of Ciright over the years (who is a serial entrepreneur), and followed the development of its cloud computing platform. My enthusiasm for the company's product and for its long devotion to handheld device business programs apparently came through to sound too much like advertising in the article I posted on the company! I will return to edit the article and confine my comments to just the facts! GPfeiffer (talk) 15:26, 12 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I edited my entry on Ciright to remove all the enthusiastic language, and replaced it with fact-based, verifiable phrasing....this is now more in the spirit of what a Wikipedia entry should be like! Thanks for your feedback! —Preceding unsigned comment added by GPfeiffer (talk • contribs) 01:27, 21 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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