Talk:Tang campaign against Kucha

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Tang campaign against Kucha/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Tomobe03 (talk · contribs) 10:31, 21 July 2013 (UTC)

I'll review the article shortly.--Tomobe03 (talk) 10:31, 21 July 2013 (UTC)

  • Checklinks reports no problems (no action needed)
  • The article contains no duplicate links (no action needed)
  • The article contains one disambiguation link - to Yarkand - please correct the link to point to one specific article
  • A US-public domain license tag should be included for image Xyj-tang seng.jpg
  • If "Aksu" mentioned in the lead is one of the places mentioned in Aksu disambiguation, please link the term accordingly
  • Please link "Karasahr" at the first instance (provided that is the appropriate article)
  • Please link "Tarim Basin", "Western Turkic Khaganate" at the first instance in the "Background" section. WP:OVERLINK allows one link in the lead and one in the main prose.
  • Ditto for "Western Turks were defeated" (link to Conquest of the Western Turks) in the final section.
    • Already linked in the previous sentence.--Typing General (talk) 19:38, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Sentence "The Tang, Tibetans, and Turks competed for influence in the Tarim Basin for the remainder of the dynasty." might be better off if it indicated a year of a century or some other sort of indication until when did the dynasty last.

Nice article overall with little to mend in terms of GACR. Good work.--Tomobe03 (talk) 17:12, 24 July 2013 (UTC)