Talk:DJ Got Us Fallin' in Love/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 15:31, 10 August 2012 (UTC)

General[edit]

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Info box[edit]

  • You don't need to link Max Martin and Shellback twice. I'd unlink them as publishers.
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Lead[edit]

  • No issues.

Background and composition[edit]

  • was first leaked → a song can only leak once, so saying first is irrelevant
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Critical reception[edit]

  • It's either mixed or positive. I'm inclined to say mixed, as you proceed this by talking about a criticism.
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  • three-and-a-half starts → I think you can work out the mistake!
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  • whilst also → Apparently "whilst" is archaic or something now, so better to say "while"
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  • Though he noted the lyrics as repetitive, but stated → Despite citing the lyrics as repetitive, he thought
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Chart performance[edit]

  • 2×/4× → We just write two times/four times
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Music video[edit]

  • No issues.

Live performances[edit]

  • No issues.

Track listing[edit]

  • No issues.

Credits and personnel[edit]

  • No issues.

Charts and certifications[edit]

  • The US charts should be in order, so Hot 100, then A/C, then Adult Pop, the Hot Dance, then Hot R&B.
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  • Can you make the two year end charts the same width length.
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Release history[edit]

  • No issues.

References[edit]

  • Rap-Up is the work, Devin Lazerine is the publisher.
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  • FN39/40: Remove That Grape Juice. Big no no. Hugely unreliable, bias and self published website who have no qualifications.
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Summary[edit]

Oh hold. AaronYou Da One 11:07, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

I think everything is good now. Rayman95 (talk) 18:02, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
Passing. AaronYou Da One 12:31, 20 August 2012 (UTC)