Talk:Erika Chambers

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The article, as it existed before my recent edits, spent very little time on Erika Chambers, and a great deal of time on background, etc. When I first read it, it was difficult to find the parts directly related to the subject of the article.

I believe that additional reductions should be made in the later paragraphs, so that we find up with an article which is clearly focused on the woman who is the subject of the article. Details of events that did not involve Erika Chambers are well documented in other articles. Only the briefest summary is necessary.

If anyone disagrees, please let me know hereJsolinsky (talk) 00:54, 1 February 2011 (UTC)