Talk:European multilateral defence procurement
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Purpose of this article ?
This article reads like a contrived excuse to push views about "how well the Europeans (meaning, the EU, also - in a sense) are doing" ... etc...
The article needs to be much more objective with reference to the stated title, and the blurring of "Europe" in the title with a pro-EU slant needs removing. Or else, of course, change the title.
Worthy article in it's aims, perhaps, but it needs basic work before filling out with the details.
Any takers, or objections. I might have a stab sometime if there's no constructive comment either way. Anon.
I have tried to tidy up a little and make it a little more NPOV. Much more work is required. 126.96.36.199 11:38, 30 November 2006 (UTC)
- I agree. I've placed citation flags for what seem to be the most questionable assertions. The claim that the F-35 won't be as widely used throughout Europe as the F-16 seems particularly dubious as many European countries are already taking part in the F-35 development program. --Nick Dowling 23:13, 1 December 2006 (UTC)
- Yes, many, but not as many. And there's a lot more skepticism than there was to the F-16 which had no viable European competitor. --Joffeloff 01:49, 2 December 2006 (UTC)
- The F-16 allowed some production and maintenence work to go to European companies, so governments were still partly 'buying local'. With the JSF there will be one factury ( in Texus ) and the workshare is largely decided and probably cannot be changed, so buying the JSF means no local jobs. However whether the Typhon nations will allow jobs to be exported in return for sales also seems open to debate. The Saudis did not get work share for example. 188.8.131.52 10:39, 6 February 2007 (UTC)
- Another agreement as to the general ill-health of the article. At the moment it's dreadful, like a year 1 undergraduate essay in progress. And the standard of English is poor, but there's no point correcting this until the purpose and outline of the article is sorted out. Matt Whyndham 17:49, 29 January 2007 (UTC)
- Lacking a focus and/or purpose? Yes. But dreadful? No way. It's not even close to good but I've cleaned up my fair share of dreadful articles and this is nowhere near as bad. Mark83 23:46, 29 January 2007 (UTC)
It's ironic that the author points to numerous European projects as examples of success but none of them are truly pan-European in any sense. Typhoon is the nearest but that excludes the French! 184.108.40.206 10:55, 6 February 2007 (UTC)
Why would European governments suddenly start backing their own defense industry and replace their american stock with self-made gear if not to strengthen their own economy and autonomy? Could you come up with another reason? Joffeloff 11:35, 18 March 2006 (UTC)
- I put up a link to the EDA, which does just that. Can I make the suggestion to merge this article with the article on the EDA? It would fit perfectly, and be under a somewhat more encyclopedic heading. Anybody feel like a collaboration? :-) Cheers, The Minister of War (Peace) 13:13, 18 March 2006 (UTC)
European defence spending is critised for being more about job creation, independence from the U.S. and prestige than actual capablities. 220.127.116.11 10:55, 6 February 2007 (UTC)
- Could you please clarify why job creating in europe and independence from US defence products is a bad thing? US defence spendings are employement programs too, and the black programs are mostly subsidies for US companies, so why do you critize EU for doing the same? Regarding capabilities, can you please give some insight? For example, Eurofighter Typhoon is worldwide known as one of the most capable fighter planes in the world, at 1/3rd of price of a F-22. --Supersymetrie (talk) 10:53, 21 October 2008 (UTC)
I moved this article: adding the word Union. The article seems to be concerned with the EU and its member states. If it were a truely European article, then a lot of information about other nations such as Russia deserve inclusion--jrleighton 00:23, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
- I don't think that the new title is an improvement. As the EU doesn't have a military and each EU member has its own defence procurement policy the current title is missleading. IMO, it would be better to expand the article to include Russian defence procurement rather than give it a new title. Alternetly, as defence procurement is handled at the national level there might not be any reason for this article to exist in its current form, and it might be better to create a 'Current European Defence procurement cooperation' article to cover joint projects such as the Eurofighter and move the stuff on national policies to other articles. --Nick Dowling 01:12, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
Russia is not seeking integration with NATO/EU-Europe, which puts them outside the scope of this article. The purpose of this article is to document the relation between the defence procurement of European nations, with the exceptions of Belarus, Ukraine, Moldova and Russia which are currently the only European countries not integrating within the 'NATO/EU/Brusselsphere' (it doesn't have a name, does it?) When you name it European Union procurement, you abandon countries like Norway, Turkey and Switzerland who are integrated with Europe and buy European equipment (for example, they all have Leo 2s, the 'European tank') but are not EU members. They do have a place in the article. --Joffeloff 16:01, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
- There is a good point being made above. I propose that articles are named with as much precision as possible to save making assumptions [ e.g. Europe = EU is a common assertion ] that don't hold true. Thoughts from others ? --jrleighton 15:05, 5 June 2007 (UTC)
- Sorry to butt in here, but I fundermentally don't understand this article. If it is about defense procurement in Europe, then why the European Defense Agency info box? Is it supposed to be about procurement by the European Defense Agency? Procurement by individual member states of the European Union? Weapons procurement by the European Union? I really don't mean to just criticise other peoples work without helping, but maybe it helps to point out just how confusing amd maybe misleading this article appears to an outsider... Best regards 18.104.22.168 01:58, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
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The whole "Conclusion" section is nothing more than an original research section. 22.214.171.124 21:31, 31 October 2007 (UTC)