Talk:Festival Internacional de Benicàssim
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Reads like an advertisment
Reads like a blatant advertisment for the festival to me. Phrases such as "Year after year, it manages to surprise" and "an unforgettable holiday on the shores of the Mediterranean" are really a bit excessive. Also, what does "...who are a reference on the world stage" mean? 18.104.22.168 (talk) 15:47, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
Lack of content
It seems to me there should be a little more to this page than a list of bands and a note on the controversy the festival generates. Perhaps a little bit of information on benicassim, a little bit of history of the evolution of the festival, its facilities, the organisers and so forth. I'll try and do a bit of research on it if I have the time, but meanwhile if anyone who knows something about comes along, perhaps they could put some of this in? Lewyblue 21:58, 19 September 2007 (UTC)
Not so controverted
The section concerning Valencian-speaking bands was overemphasized, especially taking into account the conciseness of the rest of the sections. I have removed a few sentences that I found were repetitive and/or superfluous.