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Improvement Ideas[edit]

I would like too see one Shakira article get a Good Article tag. Fijacion Oral would be a good place to start. We can start by improving the critical reviews section, making a separate commercial reception section, a promotion section that talks about the singles and their chart performance along with a brief paragraph or two about the Oral Fixation Tour. Also, we need to find more information regarding the recording, collaborations, compositions of the songs, etc. to help improve the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.109.147.18 (talk) 06:52, 23 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Untitled[edit]

I thought the album's name is Fijacion Oral Vol. 1??

singles[edit]

Neither Obtener Un Si or Las De la Intuition have charted on the billboard hot latin tracks. Nor have No and Dia De Enero on the Billboard hot 100

http://billboard.com/bbcom/retrieve_chart_history.do?model.vnuArtistId=147604&model.vnuAlbumId=683532 http://www.allmusic.com/cg/amg.dll?p=amg&searchlink=SHAKIRA&sql=11:mflvadokt8wj~T51

24.23.228.148 02:10, 3 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

According to Billboard the following songs charted on the following charts:

Dia Especial - Latin Pop Songs (#26)^[1] Las de la Intuicion - Latin Pop Songs (#16) and Latin Songs (#32) ^[2] — Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.109.147.18 (talk) 06:19, 25 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

References

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Notes[edit]

From Billboard: [3] Erick (talk) 19:39, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Maine12329 (talk · contribs) 09:04, 14 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

A few issues with the references but article is overall well written

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
Replacable primary sources.
Should metrolyrics really be the reference 15 in the 3rd and 4th paragraphs?
reference 15 could be improved. (billboard.biz is defunct) reference 21 does not state the director's name.

Ref 15 leads to a archived version of the site which is perfectly acceptable if no substitute can be found. See WP:LINKROT. Erick (talk) 19:44, 14 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
I think that section 2's references can be easily improved. No major issues with the article

I corrected the Metrolyrics references and added one for the director. However, the Billboard.biz (archived) reference opened up fine for me. WikiRedactor (talk) 19:52, 14 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

regarding that archived reference, I've left a comment on Wikipedia talk:Using the Wayback Machine because I just find it strange that a subscription-only chart is archived and may result in copyright violations. It's not a problem with this Shakira article then. I had thought that perhaps the usual citing of Billboard [4] would suffice but apparently their chart archives for Latin Songs Year-End don't date back to 2005. ⊾maine12329⊿ talks ✿wiki 01:14, 15 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Before the website relaunched earlier this year, it had posted Year-end charts up till 2002. The others could be found by searching Billboard magazines on Google Books. Now, only Google Books can be used for earlier years and some of the issues are missing which contain year-end charts. Erick (talk) 05:07, 15 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Don't want to interrupt but it seems the article has passed. If so, then one should certainly change the talk page and do all that icon and listing stuff. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:03, 15 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Quick comments[edit]

These are just brief comments so I didn't include them in the PR:

Images need alt text including the album cover
The four million sales needs an "as of" date. Erick (talk) 17:11, 27 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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