Talk:First aid

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"Aims"[edit]

This bullet point under the "Aims" section appears to be a run on sentence.

"Prevent further harm: also sometimes called prevent the condition from worsening, or danger of further injury, this covers both external factors, such as moving a patient away from any cause of harm, and applying first aid techniques to prevent worsening of the condition, such as applying pressure to stop a bleed becoming dangerous."
How can we make it better?

Brad paintball13 (talk) 11:33, 30 July 2015 (UTC)