Talk:Flash Gallery

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Please review this article![edit]

This is my first article, so any feedback on improving it will be much appreciated. Thanks!

Just some feedback.[edit]

Hello. Thanks for submitting this. For starters, you need to write in complete sentences and paragraphs. There's a lot more to learn, but I'd advise you to just do that to begin with and then resubmit. Sincerely, your friend, GeorgeLouis (talk) 23:43, 6 April 2009 (UTC)

Review again please.[edit]

Thanks for your help! Please take another look. I've added some info and tried to use complete sentences. Not sure about feature list however, doesn't make much sense to use complete sentences there. Andrey Markin (talk) 14:10, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

I fixed it. GeorgeLouis (talk) 18:40, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

Write in text, not lists[edit]

See Wikipedia:Mos#Bulleted_and_numbered_lists. Sincerely, GeorgeLouis (talk) 15:42, 31 May 2009 (UTC)

Yes, but don't you think it reads much better with a list? I would say that features list is kind of a standart for such things as software - it allows users to take a quick glance and understand what software is all about without the need to read a boring paragraph. :-) Andrey Markin (talk) 10:17, 5 June 2009 (UTC)

Hmm. Frankly, I don't think it reads better as a list. In any event, you asked for help in writing the article and I attempted to give it. I think the paragraph form is advised because WP is an encyclopedia, not a shorthand, telegraphic way of giving information. If you want to switch it back, go right ahead. Just so you know the general rule, which I think I have limned for you adequately. Sincerely, your friend, GeorgeLouis (talk) 00:15, 6 June 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, I really appreciate your help! Andrey Markin (talk) 09:21, 7 June 2009 (UTC)