Talk:Gegenmiao massacre

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Sources as per WP:NONENG[edit]

As per the above policy on non-English sources, they are less preferred compared to English sources. Due to the unverifiability for most readers it would be beneficial if somebody could translate pertinent quotes from those sources and quote them appropriately within the article, and optimally find a few more reliable English sources. Rarkenin (talk) 22:45, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

I added one English source that confirms some aspects of the massacre. However, the tone of the article does not seem neutral. Also, some of the sources cited, like the Nobukatsu Fujioka book, are themselves not likely to be neutral sources. This requires the attention of a neutral expert. Michitaro (talk) 02:49, 21 February 2014 (UTC)
Having stumbled onto this article, I concur about the neutrality problems. I am going to fix some of the grammatical errors (where I can; it is unclear what is meant by "Chinese attacked" - plural Chinese people - but civilian or military is not clear). But this really does need to be reviewed. It seems to be heavy on the emotion, but I am guessing that the author is not a native English speaker and it could simply be errors in translation. — Preceding unsigned comment added by (talk) 12:23, 12 September 2015 (UTC)