Talk:Golden Ticket (The Office)/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Nice work on the article! Here's my comments:

  • Could you add some information about the cultural references in the lead?
  • Could you spell out CFO in the plot section?
  • Link "knock knock jokes".
  • Use en dashes in the reception section instead of hyphens.

As usual, I'll put the article on hold for seven days so that you can fix this. Good luck! :) TheLeftorium 19:54, 18 March 2009 (UTC)

  • I think I got them all, although let me know if I miss an en dash or something! lol. — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 23:03, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
  • Nice work. I'll pass the article now. —TheLeftorium 15:01, 19 March 2009 (UTC)