Talk:Hartmann F. Stähelin

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Review comments[edit]

Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

  • Template:Infobox Scientist should be added
  • Photograph should be added from a source with a free license
  • Needs copy edit and wikification
  • Basic biographical information required; unclear whether subject is still living
  • Lead needs expanding to cover all aspects of the subject's life and research
  • Discoveries section needs further organisation and splitting into sub-headings
  • References should be expanded to include secondary sources; they should preferably be converted into numbered format
  • External links to useful online resources should be added if available

Espresso Addict 15:15, 22 August 2007 (UTC)