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Expansion to article[edit]

Just to let you know, I've expanded the article. I hope that has improved it. Ross Rhodes (talk) 22:15, 24 March 2009 (UTC)

The referenced link is dead. Also, the article should start with a clear and concise definition/explanation of what a "Hill Partridge" is. The reader should know within the very first sentence that the Hill Partridge is a bird/spider/car/city/warship/whatever. Do not assume that the reader has any kind of background knowledge about the subject. Wikipedia was designed as an encyclopedic reference, so the format of each article should reflect that. --Patriotic dissent (talk) 01:51, 12 April 2009 (UTC)