"A hurricane hunter plane flew into Gladys on the afternoon of September 13 was unable to obtain wind data due to darkness." Can you clarify? Were the skies too dark? Did they not see the anemometer because lack of backlight?
The source just says "due to darkness" and does not specify.--12george1 (talk) 00:26, 3 March 2013 (UTC)
Why do you capitalize 'Best Track?' And isn't HURDAT the best track?
Oh right, HURDAT is the best track--12george1 (talk) 00:26, 3 March 2013 (UTC)
"... and fell to Category 3 early..." I think you should use something other than 'fell.' If you're using 'fell,' you should say Category 3 strength.
Changed to "...and fell to a Category 3 hurricane early..."--12george1 (talk) 00:26, 3 March 2013 (UTC)
"brought to South Carolina was an 1 inch (25.4 mm) of rainfall which was reported in Myrtle Beach..." This is fine, but it sounds weird. Maybe it could be changed to "...brought to South Carolina was minor rainfall, peaking at 1 inch (25.4 mm) in Myrtle Beach,..."
"produced light rainfall of 0.38 inches (9.6 mm) across the state..." So across the state all rainfall totals were exactly 0.38 inches?
Nope, just one location (as a peak total), but I cannot find specifically where it was.--12george1 (talk) 00:26, 3 March 2013 (UTC)
"A boy was washed into the sea by the waves Narragansett and was rescued by the United States Coast Guard servicemen,..." First off what does 'by the waves Narragansett' mean, and you should say just 'United States Coast Guard servicemen' and not 'the.'