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Edits for Minato Oba
I just want to propose adjusting some information about Minato, particularly her personality and style characteristics. This is the current version:
"Minato has tanned skin and blonde hair. She is very tall and has a large bust, in comparison to other students. Despite her mature appearance, she has a very child-like personality and is emotionally very sensitive, which makes her prone to cry. When she receives help from other students, she will persistently and excessively try to return the favor back to the person."
and these are the edits I propose to make with the edits themselves in bold:
"Minato is a tall, blond girl with a tanned complexion reminicent of the Ganguro style, and also has a more developed bust than the other girls. Despite her mature appearance, she has a very child-like personality which causes her to become teary eyed over the most trivial of matters. She also maintains an unusual level of childish innocence, causing her to interpret things differently than the other and at times be almost helpless doing the simplest of tasks. When she receives help from other students, she will persistently and excessively try to return the favor back to the person usually well beyond the norm and almost completely attaching to them. A sports nickname given to her is "Harbor Bunny".
This might be a bit wordy but gives a good summary of her personality and style without revealing any plot specific events.
- Go bold and edit however you like as long as you think you're following the wikipedia guideline. I like you edit, but the nickname part (Harbor Bunny) doesn't really seem necessary there. It's only featured in the anime and it is just literal ENglish translation of Minato's name.Stevefis (talk) 16:04, 6 January 2009 (UTC)
Better plot synopsis than mine?
I just wrote a quick one based on the first episode because it was better than an empty "Story" section.
Thanks for filling up the story section
Hey, i'm here to thank you for filling up the story board section which i made lastnight. As for the story's expansion section, i suggest to wait a while to think up a better one if the anime goes in an understandable section. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Kubaru (talk • contribs) 10:02, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
Now how about the Plot section? It says the fictional academy is based in Kyushu, but the slogan, "Boys be ambitious" was introduced to Japan by Americans in Hokkaido, not Kyushu. So why do we believe the adacemy is in Kyushu? 220.127.116.11 (talk) 08:32, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
New Characters: The Four Deities of Kamizono
with the release of chapter 32, a couple of characters seems to have been introduced, dubbed as The Four Deities of Kamizono, Shishimaru being one of them. Aside from their first names (Kirin Muromachi and Takaya Nara) making reference to a certain animal (Kirin = Giraffe, Taka = Eagle/Hawk), their surnames makes references to historical eras in Japan.
I'm still a newbie to editing Wikipedia articles, so i took the liberty to change a bit of Shishimaru's info based from this new chapter. i'd add in for the other two characters, but i'm still not sure how to write down their names in Kanji, and make a reference note. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 18.104.22.168 (talk) 11:57, 20 April 2009 (UTC)
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