Talk:I Don't Give A/GA1

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 14:44, 7 June 2013 (UTC)

General
Info box
  • The recording studios should be for example "Sam West Studios, London, England;". The studio should be written first, not in brackets and not small.
  • Hip-hop before Pop, as H is before P
Lead
  • If it is a Pop song with electronic and hip hop beats, then it's not a hip hop song, so that should be removed from the info box.
  • "Lyrically... ;the lyrics" → Try and phrase this differently so you don't use the same word twice so close.
  • Although not released as a single, due to digital downloads from its parent album, the song has charted on the South Korean Gaon Chart. → Too long winded for no reason, doesn't need three clauses. Change to: Following the release of MDNA, the song peaked at number 117 in South Korea.
Background and development
  • In July 2011, Solveig → Where is his first name? And link it too.
  • Martin Solveig commented → On the contrary, his first name should not be used from now on in the article. Only the first time.
Composition and lyrical interpretation
  • Solveig's first name shouldn't be here and shouldn't be linked, as it was in the previous section.
  • Can you check that Minaj is credited as a writer as Onika Maraj, that's her legal name and is what she is always credited as a writer as. Nicki Minaj is a stage name.
  • with Martin Solveig providing additional synths & drums. → Just use his surname
  • seeing her running through her insane schedule as a celebrity supermom,[14] involving single-mum childcare, meeting the press, gym, tweeting on elevators, and many others activities. → Are these all your own words? Sounds really bias, "her insane schedule as a celebrity supermom"
Critical reception
  • Why is the (magazine) bit present for Time Out ?? It shouldn't be there.
Live performance
  • performed the song... performance of the song → Sounds too similar, needs to be reworded
  • Madge grabbed a guitar for Nicky Minaj → Spelling mistake for Nicki
Credits and personnel
  • Recording location is not management
Charts
  • In South Korea, the song debuted at number 117 on the Gaon International Downloads Chart, selling 3,101 copies. → Following the release of MDNA, "I Don't Give A" debuted on the South Korea Gaon Single Chart at number 117 during the week of 25 to 31 March 2012, due to digital download sales of 3,101.
  • I have re-formatted the reference for this so it is easier than telling you how to do it. Also, the webcite archive is the wrong page, it shows 1-100, not 101-200 chart positions, and this song peaked at 117, so that needs to be fixed.
References
  • Instead of {{reflist|2}} use {{Reflist|30em}}, it's a lot cleaner and clearer
  • FN1: Needs a publisher which is Prometheus Global Media
  • FN2: MTV News should not be italics, and it needs a publisher which is Viacom
  • FN5: Needs a publisher which is Buzz Media
  • FN6: Unlink Billboard, it's the second time in the refs, and add the publisher
  • FN9: Star Observer needs a publisher
  • FN10: Same as FN2, should not be italics and needs an unlinked Viacom
  • FN11: Needs a publisher
  • FN12: Needs a publisher
  • FN13: Needs a publisher
  • FN14: Needs a publisher
  • FN15: Same as FN10
  • FN16: Same as FN10
  • FN18: Needs a publisher
  • FN20: Why is Time Out piped with (magazine) on show? Also needs a publisher
  • FN21: This is how they should all be, both the work and publisher parameters are present. Always do this.
  • FN23: ?? Should be Billboard and Prometheus Global Media
  • FN24: PopCrush should not be italics and should be linked and needs a publisher
  • FN28: Needs a publisher
Status

Failing, article is not ready for GA. Far too many mistakes and basic errors which should not be present.  — AARONTALK 17:43, 8 June 2013 (UTC)


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