Talk:It's Alive! (Dexter)/GA1
Very nice job. I have a very small amount of suggestions...
In the first sentence where you talk about Debra exercising incessantly and being barely able to sleep, could you mention that its because of the whole Ice Truck Killer thing? You mention later in the paragraph that she was his fiancee, but by not mentioning it in the beginning of the paragraph it's not clear that she's staying with Dexter and exercising obsessively because she's trying to cope with that situation.
Maybe it's worth mentioning something about Michael C. Hall's comments on Dexter and his frame of mind in this episode from this source: "" Talking about where Dexter is as Season 2 begins, star Michael C. Hall said, "I think his world is pretty rocked. He encountered [his brother], a person he never anticipated encountering, someone who sees him for who he is, accepts him as such, and he really has no choice but to do him in. And so, I think when we meet Dexter at the top of Season 2, he's still reeling from that, and any footing he's able to establish for himself is pretty much immediately pulled out from under him." ""
Could you mention in here, as per this source, that the 1.09 viewers for this episode was a 67% improvement over the series launch and 40% above its season one average? It might be worth mentioning from this review that the reviewer felt the scenes involving the Laguerta/Pasquale storyline seems a bit contrived. The reviews mentioned are a bit heavy on the positives and less so on the negatives.
- Thanks for the review. I think I've addressed all of your concerns. —97198 (talk) 03:09, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
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